Sammidysam Posted October 16, 2008 Report Share Posted October 16, 2008 For this, you can get a free +rep if you can help me make it any better. But this is just the Synchro monster I am working on.Here it is. And I know, you say congrats to becoming an Advanced Member. If I think your comment is really good, I will +rep you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted October 16, 2008 Report Share Posted October 16, 2008 OCg is good. However, the pic editing could be better. Look in a shop. Might be a little bit Oped. DEf down to 2900. overall: 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted October 16, 2008 Report Share Posted October 16, 2008 AH! My eyes! >.< Lol jk.____________________________ this card's ATK and DEF switch = you can switch the ATK and DEF of this card. Maybe add some more effects to it. Seems kinda ... plain. :neutral:The idea is ok though. but if you do add more effects, it could come out better. ^_^ Also: congratz on 3 stars (150 posts) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sammidysam Posted October 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2008 I'll +rep you both because I liked both of them but I am not editing, sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BulletMan Posted October 16, 2008 Report Share Posted October 16, 2008 its okay. but there are some problems...there is a word in the pic. not good. and why is it green? and congratz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sammidysam Posted October 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2008 Why do you think it is green? To make it look better! And I don't care! Sheesh, I liked it when people liked the cards I made. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted October 17, 2008 Report Share Posted October 17, 2008 I hate the recolor, don't use Paint, seems underpowered without the effect. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted October 17, 2008 Report Share Posted October 17, 2008 Bring down the color a little bit. It would be better a darker green. OCG is good. 7/10 (8/10 if the color was darker.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 Yeah, the Color choice was not the best I have seen. OCG is solid, and the effect is kinda bland. Gratz on the 150! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 yeah, congrats. the color of the card gives me a headache ^__^ but i like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 Woah! Maybe make a bit darker. 8) Otherwise, awesome! I can't do that!:shock: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 IMO, PoC/PoS. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 ' pid='1245755' dateline='1224295136']IMO' date=' PoC/PoS.[/quote'] English, please? >_< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chainsaw20x6 Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 i can recolor it for you if you give me the image for the not colored version (im not great but im okay at it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 Make it an Acid Synchro Card :DAnyways, simple, but AWESOME effect ^_^ Excellent Art.-Yoshi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max. Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 I like it! 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 Bllaarrghhh!!!! Sorry, but the recolour is a piece of s***. What program have you used? Try to look up a tut. As for the card itself it is very good as is the OCG and grammar. The effect rocks! Colour -10/10Card 20/10Overall 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Welche Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 Ninja? Ninja? Ok so I have a few comments. The Re-colorYou could have done a better job. The name has some white patches. Then we have the color. Why would you pic a vibrant yellow. I think it would be cooler if it were white, or dark orange. If you look at the effect the re-color sort of makes it hard to read. The pic seems to be partly the same color as the card. The attribute and stars are good. The border to the pic is only half re-colored though. I will give the re-color a 6/11. The Name Stars Attribute ATK DEF.These are interesting. The name good be better, may I suggest "Protector Lord", or some thing to do with ninjas? The ATK is not to high, maybe give it another level and 500 ATK. The attribute would be better as dark. Wait! The name could be "Bringer Of Dawn". The sticker at the bottom is gold, so it should be a LIMITED EDITION. SET ID could be "EN001-NSB". NSB would stand for "Ninjas Strike Back".I give thee a 7/10 The PictureI have seen better, but if you cropped the bottom and a bit from the right, then it would be better because I don't like the text at all and the guy would be more centered.. Like I said earlier, the re-color seems to have affected the pic. It looks ok, but the border around the pic should go, as in make it the regular color. The staff has a moon, so it could have an effect about summoning things. Also the light coming up from the back is why I suggested "Bringer Of Dawn"I don't like it that much. 4/9 The EffectThis is were things get tough. You see, I was hopping for a longer effect because of the importance of this thread. If I were to have made it, it would have involved summoning a creature of light. The light monster would have been more powerful, but we are talking about your effect. The re-color shows its flaws. The effect should go like this, though I am horrible at OCG."If "Double Armed Ninja" is face-up on [your side of the] field then you can switch the ATK and DEF of this card.". The thing in "[]" meant that is you want to use it you can, but if not then don't.Out of 8 I give 8/8 nice and original. Overall, I give it a 8.7/10. Good card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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