Instinct Posted October 17, 2008 Report Share Posted October 17, 2008 [align=center]I made this card for a contest. Hope you like it. ^_^ Any errors you find will be greatly appreciated. Increase the ATK of this card by 300 for each "Czevrui Centaur" on your side of the field. When this card declares an attack, toss 2 coins. If the result is 2 heads, Special Summon 1 "Czevrui Centaur" from your hand or Deck in Attack Position. If the result is 2 tails, destroy all "Czevrui Centaur" on your side of the field at the end of the Damage Step.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Gravity Binder† Posted October 17, 2008 Report Share Posted October 17, 2008 Nice name and love the pic..... 8/10.... no errors here >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DesCrow Posted October 17, 2008 Report Share Posted October 17, 2008 it says Beat-Warrioraside from that it's a great card.8.5/10(for error, and me not know how to pronounce name, I assume it'sChev-Roo-EE) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chinotornes Posted October 17, 2008 Report Share Posted October 17, 2008 This card is pretty cool other than the fact that it's not a centaur, it's a minotaur. a centaur has the body of a horse and the upper body of a man whereas a minotaur has the appearance of a bull but stands like a man and has hands. just thought you might like to know. i'm not very sure but i think you could say flip 2 coins instead of toss 2 coins but otherwise no errors.as for the rating 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gogeta™ Posted October 17, 2008 Report Share Posted October 17, 2008 Aside from the Beat-Warrior error this card is very very good, 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted October 17, 2008 Report Share Posted October 17, 2008 Very good card indeed, in terms of OCG and pic.There are a a coupe of errors like the name shoud be minotaur (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Minotaur) instead.And also the 'Beast-Warrior' thing. Also the more I look at it, it seems that the pic doesn't belong in the TCG world...hmm. It's too 'paint-y'.OK i'll stop... ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted October 17, 2008 Report Share Posted October 17, 2008 Change to face-up Attack Position, good pic and effect. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted October 17, 2008 Report Share Posted October 17, 2008 instead of "If the result is 2 heads/tails..."try... "If the results are heads/tails.."and the Beast-Warrior thing too... no hyphen in betweenits a ok card7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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