First cards/Preview of a set?

[kelvin12622]

These are my first cards, and maybe a new set. I'm thinking for it to be called "Call of Everchange" or something. These cards center on constantly shifting, as in having other monsters be targets instead of them, being returned to the hand or deck to avoid attack, having their ATK and DEF constantly switched, and even being able to have their name and effect switched to match one in your hand!

 

Once per turn, roll a 6-sided die. Increase this monster's ATK by the number rolled X100. If this monster is attacked you can return this card to your Deck and Special Summon 1 monster from your hand. The monster Special Summoned by this effect is selected as the target for the attack. After Damage Calculation destroy the monster and Special Summon this card from your Deck.

You may only activate this card if there is "Land of Everchange" on the field. Choose a monster on the field. Change the selected monsters name and effect to match a monster of your choice in your hand. Pay 1000 life points every turn this card is on the field. If you cannot, destroy this card and increase your opponents lifepoints by 500.

This card cannot be destroyed in battle or by a card effect. This card cannot be used for a tribute summon. While this card is on the field, it becomes the target of all attacks. Pay 1000 lifepoints every standby phase. If you cannot, destroy this card and special summon 1 "Shadow Token". You may tribute it to return this card from the graveyard to your deck.

When this card is attacked, you may choose one card on your side of the field with "Everchange" in it's name to be the target instead. If you use this effect, increase your opponent's life points by 500 during your end phase.

 

I DON'T OWN ANY OF THE PICTURES!

 

Rate please, ideas, suggestions, and corrections are welcomed.

[Corinthian]

OCG is okay, not bad for your first cards. Same with Pics.

 

Overall, good for a newbie. 7/10.

[K.B. strategist]

Select instead of choose

Life Points

Tribute Summon

Standby Phase

Special Summon

Tribute

Deck

Graveyard

Need stats for the "Shadow Token" (Type/Atribute/Level/ATK/DEF)

End Phase

^Those are only the caps and some of the wording problems. The rest would require full ocg fixes and I'm too lazy to do all that. First card is excellent for one of your first. Others, though riddled with errors, have interesting effects and pretty good pics.

[MasterHiei]

Nice pics man real nice. the cards are good too keep it up