Bowza Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 Im about to make the new Deck of Destruction with 40 cards including the ultimate Dragon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Hunter™ Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 Hmm... not bad but there are some stuff you should know: Your cards has to have perfect OCG (Official Card Grammar), so that means there are some OCG Errors. If youw want to learn more check the stickied thread with the "OCG Thread" words and it'll teach you there. On the card, there is not card with 12 Stars. Have you seen any playable card except the Divine Cards or Exodia (I think). And, the Fusion Materials for that card is not strong either, they're just normal monster cards. The name of the card is also overused, all of those words actually. It'll help if you only put the word "Dragon" in the last part if needed. On the effect, I was wondering why there was a Cyber End Dragon in the text. I don't see anything connected to the effect. + its bit Overpowered (For example you had "Polymerization and BEWD and REBD in your hand. You would Fuse it and halve your opponent's Life Points). So you should change that and lower the ATK and DEF. Why is it 7000, it can beat anything. Though it looks like your first card or second card, so you'll improve6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lordtyson Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 you should call it the ultimate Dragon of power! with 8 stars and 3000 atk,3000 def Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ancientspellcaster Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 Card are overpowered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 Don't use all caps in the name. life points = Life Points Cut the ATK and DEF in half (at least) Put in some negative effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chainsaw20x6 Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 five-headed dragon is lvl 12 i believe and its legal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 too powerful. also a way too overused fusion. red-eyes + blue-eyes? all of me friends have tried to make one of those from time to time. i have to. i have come to the conclusion that those too monsters just don't mix without the result becoming disastrously overpowered. 5.5/10. sorry dude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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