Dragon Warrior

[Lil Jevans]

This is what happens when I feel like making a dragon. Let me know what you think.

 

Once per Duel, when you have this card on your side of the field and 2 more 'Dragon Warriors' in your graveyard, you can Special Summon your 'Dragon Warriors' in your Graveyard to your side of the field in Face-up Attack position.

[Ancientspellcaster]

Not bad

Couple Of OCG errors

Pic has writting on it

7.5/10

[Silent Hunter™]

Ok, I see you made a Dragon Warrior Cards (kinda overused >.>) Heres my comment

 

So, the OCG of the card is a bit off. What will help you a lot is Dj Osiris' OCG Thread which teaches you what to caps and use symbols and what to use. Well I think you should know that since you were here for like a month already. So what I'm trying to say is there is just minor OCG errors, but I know you can spot them.

 

Anyway, on the card. The name of it is... Super Overused. Because you used a name that is super common (like 'Dragon Master', Dark Dragon, Master Warrior...) those kinds of names are so overused. Like yours you mixed to Types "Dragon-Type" and "Warrior-Type", which a lot of card makers make. So try to change the name to a bit unique (I guess that means the card is not unique).

 

Ok, the pic, looks like it can be an EARTH Attribute monster. Check your other cards compare a DARK and EARTH Attribute monster. You may see their different, and in this pic its obdivious that his on land so land, sword, not Darkish = EARTH. Maybe, also change the Set ID, because it should go like MMDD-EN001 like that (though that's mide Set ID). Put the number after the hyphen with the EN, and put the letters of the Set (ex. MMDD) before the hyphen.

 

On the effect, wait... why are their 2 different effects? which one do I comment on?

meh I'll just comment the one in the bottom:

What do you mean by "Dragon Warrior"? you should just say Warrior-Type and Dragon-Type monster(s). Though the last effect iz confusing, but please specify the "Dragon Warriors"

 

I see your kinda new, but my rating will be 7/10 You'll improve ;)

[Professor Cobra]

Graveyard, good pic, except for the corner, in face-up Attack Position, grammar problems. 7/10

[Lil Jevans]

Ok' date=' I see you made a Dragon Warrior Cards (kinda overused >.>) Heres my comment

 

So, the OCG of the card is a bit off. What will help you a lot is Dj Osiris' OCG Thread which teaches you what to caps and use symbols and what to use. Well I think you should know that since you were here for like a month already. So what I'm trying to say is there is just minor OCG errors, but I know you can spot them.

 

Anyway, on the card. The name of it is... Super Overused. Because you used a name that is super common (like 'Dragon Master', Dark Dragon, Master Warrior...) those kinds of names are so overused. Like yours you mixed to Types "Dragon-Type" and "Warrior-Type", which a lot of card makers make. So try to change the name to a bit unique (I guess that means the card is not unique).

 

Ok, the pic, looks like it can be an EARTH Attribute monster. Check your other cards compare a DARK and EARTH Attribute monster. You may see their different, and in this pic its obdivious that his on land so land, sword, not Darkish = EARTH. Maybe, also change the Set ID, because it should go like MMDD-EN001 like that (though that's mide Set ID). Put the number after the hyphen with the EN, and put the letters of the Set (ex. MMDD) before the hyphen.

 

On the effect, wait... why are their 2 different effects? which one do I comment on?

meh I'll just comment the one in the bottom:

What do you mean by "Dragon Warrior"? you should just say Warrior-Type and Dragon-Type monster(s). Though the last effect iz confusing, but please specify the "Dragon Warriors"

 

I see your kinda new, but my rating will be 7/10 You'll improve ;)

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When I said 'Dragon Warriors' I meant the same card but since you can have 3 of the same cards in your deck I was refering to the other 2.

Another reason why the name should be changed. I'll edit it when I think of a new name.

[Silent Hunter™]

Ok' date=' I see you made a Dragon Warrior Cards (kinda overused >.>) Heres my comment

 

So, the OCG of the card is a bit off. What will help you a lot is Dj Osiris' OCG Thread which teaches you what to caps and use symbols and what to use. Well I think you should know that since you were here for like a month already. So what I'm trying to say is there is just minor OCG errors, but I know you can spot them.

 

Anyway, on the card. The name of it is... Super Overused. Because you used a name that is super common (like 'Dragon Master', Dark Dragon, Master Warrior...) those kinds of names are so overused. Like yours you mixed to Types "Dragon-Type" and "Warrior-Type", which a lot of card makers make. So try to change the name to a bit unique (I guess that means the card is not unique).

 

Ok, the pic, looks like it can be an EARTH Attribute monster. Check your other cards compare a DARK and EARTH Attribute monster. You may see their different, and in this pic its obdivious that his on land so land, sword, not Darkish = EARTH. Maybe, also change the Set ID, because it should go like MMDD-EN001 like that (though that's mide Set ID). Put the number after the hyphen with the EN, and put the letters of the Set (ex. MMDD) before the hyphen.

 

On the effect, wait... why are their 2 different effects? which one do I comment on?

meh I'll just comment the one in the bottom:

What do you mean by "Dragon Warrior"? you should just say Warrior-Type and Dragon-Type monster(s). Though the last effect iz confusing, but please specify the "Dragon Warriors"

 

I see your kinda new, but my rating will be 7/10 You'll improve ;)

[/quote']

 

When I said 'Dragon Warriors' I meant the same card but since you can have 3 of the same cards in your deck I was refering to the other 2.

Another reason why the name should be changed. I'll edit it when I think of a new name.

Oh ok. Didn't know that, cause I thought it would be a Set or something :D