Three Wraiths

[Scibor]

Well I've been in and out for a while and I'm still trying to get my first few cards done. Tell me what you think of these three (note that two of them have appeared on the forum before):

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 5 DARK monsters in your graveyard from play. When this card is Special Summoned successfully, destroy every other monster on your side of the field. As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, you cannot summon any other monsters. When this card destroys an opponent's monster as a result of battle, inflict 1000 damage to your opponent.

 

This card cannot be Special Summoned. If this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, that monster is removed from play. Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 100 for every card that is removed from play.

 

"Corrupted Archangel" + "Reaper of Lost Souls"

Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can select any monster on the field and remove it from play. Decrease the ATK and DEF of all monsters on the field except this card by 100 for every monster that is removed from play.

 

 

Personally I think the first two are pretty good and well balanced but "Envoy of Mortality" could use a bit of work. What do you guys think?

[Rise of the Eldrazi]

For a newbie, 10/10!

[Silent Hunter™]

Ok, another Reaper scary thing...wow...

 

Anyway, back on the card. I gotta say to all the cards that there are OCG (Offical Card Grammar) Errors. I don't need to spot them but I'll tell you what will help. You should check Dj Osiris' OCG Thread that is stickied in Realist Cards (here). Trust me it'll help (look at me now ;)).

 

Ok, back to the card, the pics of the card are super overused, especially the first 2. Its all been in contests and so much cards were made of those pics. Your Set ID is ok, just don't forget to put 'EN' before each number or after each hyphen (makes it looks realistic).

 

I'm gonna now comment on the effect, though I have to do it one by one

1st Card: The word 'Corrupted' in its name is kinda already made in a sub-type (RuinMode), but its fine. Effects of it is kinda cool, but you just combined some card effects though I like the last effect. Maybe you should just lower the Level by 1 (too make it look realistic (again)).

2nd card: like I said pic is overused, but you can also take out the borders from the pic before you use it. The name also overused, try making unique ones. Kinda underpowered sometimes, because you need to Tribute 2 monsters and what if there are no removed from play cards. Plus there are more Level 5 or 6 monsters with higher ATK than this, maybe higher it up and add some effects. I don't think you did your best with this one.

3rd card: I've seen people use that pic once or twice. Ok, you've finally made a unique effect but it could be better if you add more. The pic really fits the Fusion Monster. Balanced card, but can also be a small bit underpowered. But its more of balanced. For me this is the best card from the three

 

My rating will be a 7/10 You can do better ;)

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Graveyard

 

Every = Each

 

(except this card)