Guest JoshIcy Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 IT'S NOT AN EMO POEM. HAVE YOU EVER HAD THE FLU? It sucks!!! o.O Once a year. And am out of it for 2 weeks.This poem reflects it naught. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 I'm sorry you have the flu (a sympathetic sorry) I got a flu shot last week About the poem: It's a good poem :) I like it a lot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 [align=center]This world is dark and lonelyI feel the walls closing on meThe darkness keeps on creepingI don't know where to go This world is full of painThe dead don't come back againBecause they don't want to be livingI don't know where to go Nowhere to go! Because everybody's gonna die!Because everybody's gonna die!Because nobody's gonna cry!Because everybody wants to die!DIE-AYE-AYE-AYEEEEE! Remember when you were young?You shone like the sunNow there's a look in your eyesLike black holes in the skiesYou try to glimpse the edge of your faceBut the world is a dark and lonely placeWe all just want to dieI don't know where to go Where to go? Lie down, you puny human race!Die down, you puny human race!Come on you magnet for darkness and miseryCome on you demon, you monster, you trainwreckAnd DIE! Everybody's out to get everyoneLove is dead, you knowWandering around from place to placeNobody knows where to go for death is release from the world of the world which is nothing more and nothing less than a perfect unity of all that is imperfect a dangerous quicksand trap into which we all must sink for we are nothing more than hateful fools and as we scramble to escape the quicksand we know its no use its too hard for you fools to realize your lives are falling everyones falling down so Go ahead!Laugh out loud!Join with me now!Spread the word!Tell the world!Tell these dumb cows!Open their eyes!Show them the lies!Show them the pain!The hate!The suffering!The darkness!The loneliness!Let them see what I see!Let them riot! Let them knowThat we knowWhat they knowWhat they wantDeep down withinIn the souls of our kinTo escape this rubbish binCalled life, they want release You reached for the secret too soon!You cried to the moon!Threatened by shadows at night!Exposed in the light! Fall down, you puny human race!Die down, you puny human race!Come on, you killers, you liars, you monsters,Come on, you strangers, you legends, you martyrs,And DIE! for once everyone has fallen down the world shall be purged of the dark corruption of humanity which brings naught but pain and suffering as a result of the omnipresent evil that corrupts the hearts of man so join me cut yourselves stab yourselves chop off your hands let loose the nightmare so the nightmare can end with us all ashes asheswe all fall down[/align] I wrote it myself. It's about how my girlfriend gave me a diamond engagement ring, but I cut my finger on it, and it hurt really bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted October 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 [align=center]This world is dark and lonelyI feel the walls closing on meThe darkness keeps on creepingI don't know where to go This world is full of painThe dead don't come back againBecause they don't want to be livingI don't know where to go Nowhere to go! Because everybody's gonna die!Because everybody's gonna die!Because nobody's gonna cry!Because everybody wants to die!DIE-AYE-AYE-AYEEEEE! Remember when you were young?You shone like the sunNow there's a look in your eyesLike black holes in the skiesYou try to glimpse the edge of your faceBut the world is a dark and lonely placeWe all just want to dieI don't know where to go Where to go? Lie down' date=' you puny human race!Die down, you puny human race!Come on you magnet for darkness and miseryCome on you demon, you monster, you trainwreckAnd DIE! Everybody's out to get everyoneLove is dead, you knowWandering around from place to placeNobody knows where to go for death is release from the world of the world which is nothing more and nothing less than a perfect unity of all that is imperfect a dangerous quicksand trap into which we all must sink for we are nothing more than hateful fools and as we scramble to escape the quicksand we know its no use its too hard for you fools to realize your lives are falling everyones falling down so Go ahead!Laugh out loud!Join with me now!Spread the word!Tell the world!Tell these dumb cows!Open their eyes!Show them the lies!Show them the pain!The hate!The suffering!The darkness!The loneliness!Let them see what I see!Let them riot! Let them knowThat we knowWhat they knowWhat they wantDeep down withinIn the souls of our kinTo escape this rubbish binCalled life, they want release You reached for the secret too soon!You cried to the moon!Threatened by shadows at night!Exposed in the light! Fall down, you puny human race!Die down, you puny human race!Come on, you killers, you liars, you monsters,Come on, you strangers, you legends, you martyrs,And DIE! for once everyone has fallen down the world shall be purged of the dark corruption of humanity which brings naught but pain and suffering as a result of the omnipresent evil that corrupts the hearts of man so join me cut yourselves stab yourselves chop off your hands let loose the nightmare so the nightmare can end with us all ashes asheswe all fall down[/align'] I wrote it myself. It's about how my girlfriend gave me a diamond engagement ring, but I cut my finger on it, and it hurt really bad. My poem is NOT ABOUT death, nor is it about cutting myself. Nor is this a "Write a Poem" thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiko11 Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 ashes ashes! we all fall TO OUR DOOM! sounds more exciting. the first poem about the flu was great! I sang it aloud, and loved it. I shed a tear.and since when did you guys istart playing "quote wars"? :P You guys are missing the point of this thread' date=' I wrote this because I am sick right now. Not to entertain you with a catchy tune and non-EMO lyrics.[/quote']If you're sick, talk about you being sickIf you're posting a poem, we're rating and commenting on your poem.But if you insist, I shallHow's your flu? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted October 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 Finally, someone who likes mah poem! :D:D:D:D:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiko11 Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 how could i not? It was sort of romantic in a strange way.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Posted October 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 Romantic? [face-palm] T.T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiko11 Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 xD sorry.... I didn't mean to upset you. I meant that... it just.... slightly touched me..... and I'm a cold, cold guy. Sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
「tea.leaf」 Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 Finally' date=' [b']someone[/b] who likes mah poem! :D:D:D:D:D He likes it because he has no taste. It's nothing to be proud of. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 Hey, everybody a question. Since when does a poem have "o-o-o-o-..." in it? >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 My poem is NOT ABOUT death' date=' nor is it about cutting myself. Nor is this a "Write a Poem" thread.[/quote'] My poem's not about death OR about cutting myself. It's about an owwy-boo-boo I got on my finger. Pay attention. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2sick4u Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 I love how DarkDragonX is blatantly missing the obvious irony in what Crab's saying. I also love how he proved himself hypocritical only moments ago! =O. I, for one, dislike your poem. If only because: It's 80% song. It's 15% uninspired dribble. It's 5% untalented. =). Your bubble's been bursted, get over it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 .....critism is a mustcan we stop arguing and actually talk about TEH EPIC FLU? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:^) Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 ^ LULZ EPIC HEY I LEIKED YOUR SONG/POEM/POST THINGY!!! *cries and needs hug* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 yes, TEH EPIC FLU is certainly epicI mean, it's FTW! TEH EPIC FLU video is currently unavailable thoughp.s I have a bit, but the doctor says nothing much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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