Phantasy Dreamz Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 [align=center]here i am making more cards to gian more experience at card makingso if theres any flaws or card is overpowerplease let me know... thanks feedbacks|rates are much appreciated http://th01.deviantart.com/fs23/300W/f/2007/328/c/5/Winoxish___Fire_Warrior_by_Toogar_Kobold.jpg http://th01.deviantart.com/fs4/300W/i/2005/139/7/2/Cat__s_Trail_unused_cover_by_iq40.jpg http://th01.deviantart.com/fs30/300W/f/2008/100/e/b/Lina_Inverse_by_Langaw.jpg [spoiler=Effect] This card cannot be Special Summoned by an Effect Monster's effect. This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set by tributing Fairy-Type monsters. If this card battles a non Fairy-Type monster, place 1 Halo Counter on this card. During your Main Phase 1, you can remove 2 Halo Counters from your field to Special Summon 1 Fairy-Type monster from your Graveyard, OR draw 1 card. When this card is destroyed, you can place 2 Halo Counters on a face-up monster you control. That monster cannot be targeted by a card effect. http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/Hitokiri03/Anime%20Angels/KyokoTomikawa.jpg [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max. Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted October 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 awesome mate.. thanks for rating Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rise of the Eldrazi Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 Sweet, 10/10. 200th POST! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 These are seriously cool,I like each and everyone,more good cards from you.12/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted October 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 thats kind of you...thank you for rating my cards... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted October 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 happy bump^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 First 2 pics look a tad blurred. (to me) other than that, can't find anything wrong. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01alim Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 Not bad.The first pic looks a bit 'smudged'...The last pic looks squished...(bad cropping?)All IMO.Well done. -01alim Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted October 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 thanks for your opinions....appreciate it.... ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 they are all great. demi-devil is my personal favorite. 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bunter Dwayne Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 Nice, 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cam435 Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 Hay you Did great yu gi oh cards.I'm doning the queen of the egypitan god cards.It's funny first it was slifer then ra then obelisk and now the god of the egypitan god cards wow. from cam435 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted October 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 thats nice to know..^^thanks for viewing my cards... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 The first pic is a bit blurry. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 Nice pics and OCG is good, too, 9.2/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iKiller Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 9.9/10Solid OCG from what I see, they're not overpowered, the pictures are great (and you've given the godly link back), but there'd need to be more of these awesome cards to make it a 10/10. Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Gravity Binder† Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 Totally speechless..... 10/10 ^___^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 1 pic is blurry awesome ocg 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaca Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 Pics are good.OCG is good.Effects are good.10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 Flaming Soul Demi-Devil "This card is also treated as a Level 4 monster. When this card is destroyed by battle, you can pay 700 Life Points to inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. If this card is sent to the Graveyard for a Synchro Summon, inflict 1000 damage to your opponent." Not bad at all. ^_^ Few little glitchy things though, ya need to get the little stuff right for it to be a realistic card. -Fantasy9 should not be used as the serial number, 8 random numbers should.-EN needs to be in your set id, so PHDR-EN009. -You're missing the year after the Copyright symbol and before the name. -Your circulation is unrealistic, Set IDs can be used to abbreviate the set name, but never use a set name in your circulation. -Balance issues with it being treated as a LV4. Kunoichi Princess- Blood Heart "When this card is Summoned, you can destroy 1 monster you control to destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. If you activate this effect, this card gains 100 ATK. When this card destroys a monster by battle, this card gains 100 ATK. When this card is destroyed by battle, destroy 1 monster that your opponent controls." Again, some little glitches... -Bad circulation. -Choose a different number for your set id, and second part of Set ID needs EN, and then 3 (not 2) digits. -No year.-Bad serial number.-Pic is slightly pixelated. Elven Princess - Fire Heart"When this card is Summoned, you can choose to inflict 700 damage to you or your opponent. During the End Phase, the player who took damage from this card's effect gains 1000 Life Points. When this card is destroyed by battle, both players take 700 damage." I like how this works well with Synchro Summons, to burn your opponent, and then tune it with a tuner. However, you did err again on the little things. (See above.) Also, the name needs a space before the dash. Fiona Mayland the Angel 009 "This card cannot be Special Summoned by the the effect of an Effect Monster. This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set by Tributing 2 Fairy-Type monsters you control. If this card battles a non-Fairy-Type monster, put 1 Halo Counter on this card. During your Main Phase 1, you can remove 2 Halo Counters from your field to Special Summon 1 Fairy-Type monster from your Graveyard OR draw 1 card. When this card is destroyed, you can select 1 face-up monster you control. Put 2 Halo Counters on the selected monster. Also, the selected monster cannot be targeted by a card effect." The name is worded oddly. Maybe "Fiona Mayland - The 9th Angel" would be better. Again with the little things, I've told you what they are. ;) Not bad, but still room for improvement. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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