BlackKnight Posted August 24, 2007 Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 What do you guys think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Malibutide Posted August 24, 2007 Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 I think they are really good. Great pictures, and nice abilities. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest xbon Posted August 24, 2007 Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 its okay, grammar is a BIT off but 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackKnight Posted August 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 its okay' date=' grammar is a BIT off but 9/10[/quote'] Would you mind telling me where the grammar error is? EDIT: New card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackKnight Posted August 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 I've added a new card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackKnight Posted August 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 Two new cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackKnight Posted August 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 My last card for the day, will someone please review them? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackKnight Posted August 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 I'd really like people to review these for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackKnight Posted August 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 Another new card: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muji Posted August 24, 2007 Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 SPACE VACUUM IS SPELLED LIKE THISSPACE VACUM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackKnight Posted August 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 SPACE VACUUM IS SPELLED LIKE THISSPACE VACUM 1: No, it isn't. 2. Please don't post here if you're not going to review my cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackKnight Posted August 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 97 views and only 2 comments? Come on, people, please comment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay.P. Posted August 24, 2007 Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 Hey,hey,hey!^^ Not bad,really!^^ 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackKnight Posted August 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 Hey' date='hey,hey!^^ Not bad,really!^^ 8.7/10[/quote'] Is there anything I can improve on? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackKnight Posted August 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 New card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackKnight Posted August 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 Another new card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kallan Posted August 24, 2007 Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 This one is good, but it can be overpowered. Since it simply says "Destroy 2 monsters" instead of "Up to 2 monsters," using the effect might make it backfire on you, so it's not too overpowered. I like this one, but it's seems a little meaningless in most situations. Space Vacuum- It's an awesome card, but it should be worded a little differently. "You can only activate this card when your opponent declares an attack. Remove the attacking monster from play." Machine Ninjitsu- I love this one, but the wording is ever so slightly off. Only I would notice something like this: AST -006. You spaced! xD. Robitic Ninja- This one is perfect, but you spaced again! :P Constellation Warrior- Nice desription. Perfect. Forgot to put AST-??? though. :P Magician of Gifts- This one is AWESOME! It has a nice balanced effect, not a single mistake. Elite Magician Maruka- Hee hee. Perfect. Vaku- This is different. :) P.S. I don't where he came up with you making a grammar mistake... I'm a total Grammar Nazi, and I don't see any mistakes yet. Overall, I have to give you a 10/10. I don't think I've ever seen cards this good. You certainly know how to use grammar and how to word. Good job!!! By the way, I don't judge cards by small mistakes like forgetting the AST. I mostly care about grammar and wording, but they have to be pefect. Congratulations! :D :D :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackKnight Posted August 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 Wow, thank you for the review ^^ You just about made my day right there :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackKnight Posted August 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 BUSTIN THROUGH THE BARRIER WITH NEW CARDS! Thought I'd help out all the n00bs who use Elemental Heroes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kallan Posted August 24, 2007 Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 That one wasn't as good. You should have "" around "Elemental Hero". 9/10. Tisk tisk. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackKnight Posted August 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 That one wasn't as good. You should have "" around "Elemental Hero". 9/10. Tisk tisk. :P I was thinking of that, but I wasn't completely sure if I should or not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pro36ixty Posted August 24, 2007 Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 These are some sweet cards! Keep it going dude!! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackKnight Posted August 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 These are some sweet cards! Keep it going dude!! 9/10 Trust me, I will! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilrow Posted August 24, 2007 Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 7.4/10 Quite good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackKnight Posted August 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2007 Glad you think so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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