Sinwood Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 These Legendary beasts are quite special. Rawr! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monkeypooop Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 gah! OCG errors.... 1st: "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 cards you control from play. As long as this card remains on the field, your opponent must Tribute 3 monsters in order to Normal Summon or Set any monster with a Level equal to or higher than 7." -Pretty good card. 2nd: "...by Tributing 1 Aqua-Type monster." -meh. Too simple. 3rd: "You must discard 1 card from your hand in order to declare an attack with this card. Increase this card's ATK by 500 for each monster whose Level is 8 or higher on the field." -Pretty good, still a little simple...I don't really like the name though. "Raidou" implies thunder for me. (Japanese for thunder is Rai, pretty sure) 4th: "When this card successfully deals direct damage to your opponent's Life Points, increase this card's ATK by 300." -Eh...a bit OP in my opinion. 5th: ..............what? Select the cards and what? What happens after you select them? Do they get removed from play? added to your deck? hand? field?I'm guessing you meant: "When this card is Summoned successfully, discard the top 10 cards from your Deck to add 1 Spell, Trap, and Monster Card from your Graveyard to your hand." -Sweet pic...crop out the words at the bottom though. Wow...haven't done such a long review in a long time...lucky you, lol.So most of these aren't bad, you just need to brush up on OCG (see OCG Thread)Also go read the rules: You need art credit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 OCG/grammar errors: summon = Summon tributing = Tributing "7 stars or higher" = "Level 7 or higher" Aqua = Aqua-Type atk = ATK life points = Life Points trap, spell = Spell and Trap Cards graveyard = Graveyard deck = Deck As for the rest of the card, the pictures are pretty good, but the a couple effects are worded wrong and could be a little more creative. not bad though, 6.5/10 EDIT: I see OMGAKITTY beat me to the OCG errors... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sparta™ Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 OCG/grammar errors: summon = Summon tributing = Tributing "7 stars or higher" = "Level 7 or higher" Aqua = Aqua-Type atk = ATK life points = Life Points trap' date=' spell = Spell and Trap Cards graveyard = Graveyard deck = Deck As for the rest of the card, the pictures are pretty good, but the a couple effects are worded wrong and could be a little more creative. not bad though, 6.5/10 EDIT: I see OMGAKITTY beat me to the OCG errors...[/quote'] Or it could be Trap Cards, Spell Cards, bla bla bla Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 I suppose, but why would you want to say "Cards" twice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dillon123 Posted October 20, 2008 Report Share Posted October 20, 2008 some of the pics for cards hav already been used Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sparta™ Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 I suppose' date=' but why would you want to say "Cards" twice.[/quote'] They say it on real cards, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andydrew55 Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 7/10 ___________________________ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dray Kaiba Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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