Scibor Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 My newest card. I know there are some OCG errors but forgive me because I'm still new to writing grammatically accurate effects. Please point out any mistakes and I will correct: Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can remove 1 LIGHT or DARK monster in your graveyard from play to activate the corresponding effect:-DARK: Destroy 1 monster on the field. During the turn this effect is activated, this card cannot declare an attack.-LIGHT: Destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 CC is closed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 Destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field, change corresponding to appropiate. (misspelled, but you know what I mean.) Good pic, good effect. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexeaus Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 i agree with proffeser cobra8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 That's pretty nice Scibor!I've seen alot of newcomers who don't know a thing about Yu-Gi-Oh! And just write random things in it. little Grammar problems. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scibor Posted October 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 All right, I made the mentioned edit. Any other problems with it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skarlet Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 quite probably thr best new member card ive ever seen9/10, you my friend have potential to go far in YCM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted October 21, 2008 Report Share Posted October 21, 2008 you're good! i was not nearly this good when i started out. i don't think there are any errors, at least none that i see. the effect is good and balanced, and the pic is great for a card with that title. 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted October 22, 2008 Report Share Posted October 22, 2008 Very good card. No errors that I see. Perficly balenced. Great job, keep 'em comin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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