MY FIRST CARD!!!

[summonedskull_90]

 

Give it to me straight,good or bad?

 

But tell me how I can improve!!

[Koopakingdom]

What is that picture from?Did you make it or take from an Anime?

You should make some more WIND type monsters or Fairy type monsters.Anyway not bad 8/10 :)

[∮.Ғσяgσттeи.SσℓÐιєя.∮]

not bad. ieght out of ten

[summonedskull_90]

What is that picture from?Did you make it or take from an Anime?

You should make some more WIND type monsters or Fairy type monsters.Anyway not bad 8/10 :)

 

Thx but no i didnt get it fron an anime if you go to Deviantart.com they have a lot of good pics and thx again

[Von Csent]

You say straight? Good, for a first card. Your OCG is good, save two tiny flaws: ATK and DEF are capitalized, and leave out the word "attribute". Also, the way you are applying the power-up, the ATK/DEF should be 0, not ????. The picture is slightly distorted vertically. Always use square images to avoid that.

 

As for the effect, it is okay. I would bump it up to an 800 ATK/DEF boost. Assuming you have three monsters is a good way to figure power-ups. It will have 2400 if you manage to keep all three monsters. This is usually the threshold in a game. 2400 is equal to most single-tribute monsters. Even with 2 monsters, it will have 1600. That is not great, but compared to your original 1000, it is average.

 

Overall a good effort. It is simple, but that is how first cards should be. At least it is not broken!

[summonedskull_90]

You say straight? Good' date=' for a first card. Your OCG is good, save two tiny flaws: ATK and DEF are capitalized, and leave out the word "attribute". Also, the way you are applying the power-up, the ATK/DEF should be 0, not ????. The picture is slightly distorted vertically. Always use square images to avoid that.

 

As for the effect, it is okay. I would bump it up to an 800 ATK/DEF boost. Assuming you have three monsters is a good way to figure power-ups. It will have 2400 if you manage to keep all three monsters. This is usually the threshold in a game. 2400 is equal to most single-tribute monsters. Even with 2 monsters, it will have 1600. That is not great, but compared to your original 1000, it is average.

 

Overall a good effort. It is simple, but that is how first cards should be. At least it is not broken!

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Tank you vary much for the tips

[legendhiro]

cool. a wind fairy. there aren't enough of those. i wanted to build a deck around them once, but it just wasn't very good...

 

anyway, boost up the 500 ATK to at least 800. otherwise the card is just underpowered.

 

8/10 though. also, since you are one of the few new members i've seen who DIDN'T make an overly inflated and powerful card, i'm giving you a rep too ^__^

[Monkey]

ATK

 

DEF

 

LIGHT (don't say LIGHT attribute)

 

7/10

[OMGAKITTY]

Everythings been mentioned. Not too shabby for a first. I'm expecting good things from you in teh future.

 

 

-Just one tiny thing... ===> Art Credit.

[Dray Kaiba]

Not bad, it relies on wind attributed monsters , like the harpie ladies, to make it stronger. Olny one flaw that i see atk and def should be captalized like this( ATK and DEF). Anyway 7/10.

[Professor Cobra]

ATK and DEF, WIND monster, good pic should be: ??00 because only the third and fourth digits can be changed. Not the last two. 7/10

[Von Csent]

Question marks are only used if the ATK/DEF is directly equal to something. The effect gives this gets a boost, so technically, they should be zeroes.