Pyrotechnet Posted October 23, 2008 Report Share Posted October 23, 2008 [align=center][spoiler= [b]Read First[/b]]Yes, after all this time, all the talk, all the pre-releasing of one or two of the cards, it is finally here. Some of these were holoed, with sheets found here. The pictures, for the most part, are from Photobucket. Some may be from places like deviantART or just Google Images. Where exactly you find them, well your guess is as good as mine. Now to explain Soul-Type monsters. Soul-Type monsters are very much a swarming type. Most involve Special Summoning other Soul-type monsters or adding others to your hands. They generally have lower ATK and higher Levels. But, most do not require Sacrifices to be summoned. Please, Rate and Comment. Right now, the set goes up to 50, but if you have any ideas for any more Soul monsters, feel free to request. Also, please don't just say OCG. I am not an OCG expert. If I have any errors, tell me. So, after all the wait, the wonder, with out any further ado, my Soul Monster Set, Celestial Souls. EDIT: Updated Sara-Princess of the Sapphire Army CLST-EN001Second EDIT: Updated Sprit Omega Dragon CLST-EN002 Booster Pack: by Chaotix® The Cards:[spoiler=CLST-EN001] [spoiler= CLST-EN002][spoiler=CLST-EN003][spoiler= CLST-EN004][spoiler= CLST-EN005][spoiler= CLST-EN006][spoiler= CLST-EN007][spoiler= CLST-EN008][spoiler= CLST-EN009][spoiler= CLST-EN010][spoiler= CLST-EN011][spoiler= CLST-EN012][spoiler= CLST-EN013][spoiler= CLST-EN014][spoiler= CLST-EN015][spoiler= CLST-EN016][spoiler= CLST-EN017][spoiler= CLST-EN018][spoiler= CLST-EN019][spoiler= CLST-EN020][spoiler= CLST-EN021][spoiler= CLST-EN022][spoiler= CLST-EN023][spoiler= CLST-EN024][spoiler= CLST-EN025][spoiler= CLST-EN026][spoiler= CLST-EN027][spoiler= CLST-EN028][spoiler= CLST-EN029][spoiler= CLST-EN030][spoiler= CLST-EN031][spoiler= CLST-EN032][spoiler= CLST-EN033][spoiler= CLST-EN034][spoiler= CLST-EN035][spoiler= CLST-EN036][spoiler= CLST-EN037][spoiler= CLST-EN038][spoiler= CLST-EN039][spoiler= CLST-EN040][spoiler= CLST-EN041][spoiler= CLST-EN042][spoiler= CLST-EN043][spoiler= CLST-EN044][spoiler= CLST-EN045][spoiler= CLST-EN046][spoiler= CLST-EN047][spoiler= CLST-EN048][spoiler= CLST-EN049] [spoiler= CLST-EN050][/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted October 23, 2008 Report Share Posted October 23, 2008 Pretty neat Idea :DSome good effects, and Excellent Pictures ^_^-Yoshi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted October 23, 2008 Report Share Posted October 23, 2008 Nice set, I like the pictures, there are good effects, and I like the idea. the OCG looks good just glancing at a few cards.There are some errors I saw in your first card though, but you really don't have to go in and change them.... Just for future reference. graveyard = Graveyard lifepoints = Life Points deck = Deck Very nice work, 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Devil Posted October 23, 2008 Report Share Posted October 23, 2008 Nice concept,Nice effects,nice pics,9/10.Man I love this set!^_^_^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A●O●J Posted October 23, 2008 Report Share Posted October 23, 2008 There verygood. Pics are great and effects are cool and pretty original. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cardffreak Posted October 24, 2008 Report Share Posted October 24, 2008 cool but couold use some normal soul monsters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pyrotechnet Posted October 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2008 Thank you all Nice set' date=' I like the pictures, there are good effects, and I like the idea. the OCG looks good just glancing at a few cards.There are some errors I saw in your first card though, but you really don't have to go in and change them.... Just for future reference. graveyard = Graveyard lifepoints = Life Points deck = Deck Very nice work, 9/10[/quote'] For the record, that card was made before i had any understanding of OCG. But I didn't notice. So thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~UNHOLY_PHOENIX~ Posted October 24, 2008 Report Share Posted October 24, 2008 cool but couold use some normal soul monsters You do know that almost everyone here, besides n00bs, hate vanillas, right?! Very nice caRDS, I love the subtype, and the effects are intriguing. ( Excellent job8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pyrotechnet Posted October 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2008 cool but couold use some normal soul monsters You do know that almost everyone here' date=' besides n00bs, hate vanillas, right?! Very nice caRDS, I love the subtype, and the effects are intriguing. ( Excellent job8/10[/quote'] Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
professor13 Posted October 24, 2008 Report Share Posted October 24, 2008 I like your idea some of them need work i feel there either too powerful or just not worded right. honestly it's all cool. but i really wanted to know how you made the pack i think thats so cool and would love to make my own. please tell me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pyrotechnet Posted October 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2008 Thanks. The pack was actually made for my set by Chatox® Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pyrotechnet Posted October 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 Bump!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revan Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 exellent set 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pyrotechnet Posted October 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revan Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 btw u can round that rating up ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pyrotechnet Posted October 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 I can do what? If you mean me vote to raise the rating, I tried. someone rated it 1 star and i didn't know so when i voted, it didnt change at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OnSlaUghT Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 that's a lot of cards to view! 50 is good for a set but a lot to view! LOL! the pics are great especially the dragons even though i felt i seen them before. i didn't spot anything that all soul monsters are supposed to have in common. like gemini sub-types are treated as a normal monster until you second summon them, unions can equip to specific monsters, spirit monsters return to the hand at the end phase, what do soul monsters do? the grammar needs some work but you don't have to change it as i can see the hard work put into this. the cards are slightly overpowered, and maybe that you'll have to fix. overall 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest PikaPerson01 Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 Interesting pics, and the concept of drawing and discarding... might be interesting? The OCG is just straight up awful. "This card doesn't need a sacrifice"? Ugh. Should read "This card can be normal summoned without a tribute." Also, first card is broken. Pay 500 LP to draw every card in your deck? <_< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pyrotechnet Posted October 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 No, becuase you can only do it once per turn during your draw phase, in place of your regular draw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedRecker Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 Ok, this looks like a good set and idea of what I've glanced at so far, just needs a bit of work here and there. So, I'm gonna give each card an analysis for you and show you what you might need to change (just think of it as advice, you don't have to do any of it). Ok ,its late for me here and I'm tired so I'll only do first three. 1. Sara - Princess of the Sapphire ArmyLIGHT, Warrior/ Soul, 9 Star, ATK 2700, DEF 2150The name is good, has a nice ring to it. Good pic too. The typing is all good and the stats are fair for a Level 9. I don't think I fully understand what it is a Soul monster does, just to me it sounds more like it should be an Archtype rather than a Subtype. Maybe if you had another crack at explaining it I would understand what you're going for here.Anyways, the effect. In all honesty I don't think it works too well. First off, I wouldn't have it work when Set, how is your opponent supposed to know that is what the card does, and generally effects don't activate while face-down (I think there are a few exceptions but they're exceptions for a reason).Secondly, the cost for being able to draw any card is too little. This effect basically puts the deck in any order you want, can you imagine what that would be like in a real game? To improve this you could switch the cost with your other effect, the one that destroys everything, and then change that effect to a less powerful one to make it fair. The ocg is also a bit off but I'll rewrite it as how I think it should look:"When this card is Normal Summoned successfully, both players must randomly discard 1 card from their hand. During your Draw Phase, you can remove 3 LIGHT monsters in your Graveyard from play to select and add 1 card from your Deck to your hand instead of conducting your normal draw. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can pay 500 Life Points to..."The rest I'll leave up to you, it's your card after all, not mine.Some suggestions I have though would be:"... destroy 1 face-down monster on the field. This card cannot attack in the turn it uses this effect.""select 1 face-down Spell or Trap Card that has been on the field for at least 3 End Phases and destroy it." (you might wanna check the OCG on that one with someone else)Ok, i know I said I was gonna do three but seeing the amount of time it took me to do this one, I think I'll wait till 2mrw for the others. I hope all this helps and I look forward to helping you with the rest of this set and any other cards you make in the future. Peace out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 Nice pics. OCG seems good.Love the idea. Keep up the good work!> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pyrotechnet Posted October 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedRecker Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Ok, im back, next one: 2. Spirit Omega DragonWIND, Dragon/ Soul, 9 Star, ATK 2500, DEF 1800Again, the stats are pretty balanced and the effect only needs a little bit of tweaking this time. The only problem I have is being able to attack over and over again as long as you destroy a monster, at its ATK that is a bit overpowered I think. All you then really need to do is add something like "This card cannot attack your opponent's Life Points directly" or "Negate any Battle Damage inflicted to your opponent's Life Points by this card". Then I think it should be fine. Oh, actually, one other thing. When you can Special Summon the card, you need to say from where. I assume you meant hand but if that's true you need to say so otherwise they can Special Summon it from anywhere; hand, Deck and Graveyard. Ok, I'll do another one later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pyrotechnet Posted October 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 oh,ok thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RavuriamonTheSacredBeast Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 this is an awesome set.lol no offence but i expect if these were real they would be favoured by females like the cyber girls harpies and familiar possessed.whatever you do dont like deron off yugioh gx tagforce 1 and 2 see these cards.he would drop down dead.(thats a character off a game if you didnt know.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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