Thomas Wolf Posted October 24, 2008 Report Share Posted October 24, 2008 A card that randomly came to me. I think it's pretty balenced, but I want to know what everyone else thinks. Rate and comment. Credit is in the creator section. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted October 24, 2008 Report Share Posted October 24, 2008 some serious ocg.There's way to much to ocg.Don't neg me for saying that.Advice go to Dj's OCG/Grammer Thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted October 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2008 Fixed what I could find. My main mistake was typing too fast. If there's anything else you see tell me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted October 24, 2008 Report Share Posted October 24, 2008 Declare Face-Up I think there's mor but I'm not sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted October 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2008 Alright thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Von Csent Posted October 24, 2008 Report Share Posted October 24, 2008 Declare Face-Up I think there's mor but I'm not sure. WRONG *opponent*field*battle damage*during*cannot do not Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted October 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2008 Okay, I made all edits that where pointed out. I will say I can't spell very well, so that's where alot of my mistakes came in. Now, can I get some feed back on the card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted October 24, 2008 Report Share Posted October 24, 2008 good & balanced,but the cost can be 500-800 too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Von Csent Posted October 24, 2008 Report Share Posted October 24, 2008 declare face-up I think there's mor but I'm not sure.*during You missed these. I would not play this card. It is over-priced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaca Posted October 24, 2008 Report Share Posted October 24, 2008 Alot of bad OCG but it;s all been fixed above. -WOOT! 900th post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sammidysam Posted October 24, 2008 Report Share Posted October 24, 2008 OGC errors but good. 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flavour Posted October 24, 2008 Report Share Posted October 24, 2008 OCG errors,but if thats fixed,nice.You can lower the cost a bit,too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted October 24, 2008 Report Share Posted October 24, 2008 *declare* and the cost is too high Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted October 24, 2008 Report Share Posted October 24, 2008 Don't capitalize declare, good pic, face-up, good effect. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted October 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2008 Alright fixed and lowered the cost to 500. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Von Csent Posted October 24, 2008 Report Share Posted October 24, 2008 A bit better now, but you still haven't fixed *face-up* and *during*. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted October 24, 2008 Report Share Posted October 24, 2008 some OCG errors but good card 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted October 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2008 I could have swore I did, my bad. Fixing now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xemba Posted October 24, 2008 Report Share Posted October 24, 2008 I'd rather use Waboku. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted October 27, 2008 Report Share Posted October 27, 2008 good card, pretty balanced, nice job.nice pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted October 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2008 good card' date=' pretty balanced, nice job.[hr']nice pic Thanks. I put alot of work into fine touning it, as you can probably tell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted October 27, 2008 Report Share Posted October 27, 2008 Great pic! OCG errors: Battle Damage Thats the only error I could find. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted October 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 Cause I corrected all the other ones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted October 28, 2008 Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 very nice. its a firewall card that anyone can put into their deck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flavour Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 (\__/)(='.'=)(")_(") Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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