Dr.Pain Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 Goblin Raiding Force Goblin Raiding Force is a 4-stared offensive monster used to empty your opponents hand and leave open for great attacks! When the Raiding Force strikes a face-up, your opponent must discard one card! Also, it gains more attack when it attacks a Face-down card, Guarenteed no High Deffece monsters can get past this card. Also, You can release this card when it sucessfulyl attacks dirrectly, you can discard 2 cards from your opponents hand! By the time you hit hard with this guy, your opponent will have nothing left to counter! ArtWork: Found in the lower right coner of the card. For all you lazys, alanlathwellThe CardHeres what you've been waiting for! EffectThis card cannjot be summoned if your opponent controls no monsters on the field. If this card destroys a face-up monster, your opponent randomly discards 1 card. When this card attacks a face-down deffence position, increase the attack of this card by 300 until the end of the Battle Phase. If this card sucessfully attacks your opponents life points dirrectly, you can release this card to randomly discard 2 cards from your opponents hand.Final Notes You May: Rate Give contructive Critizm Point out OCG errors Thank You! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jujitsubb777 Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 I like it, But I think it should be atleast 5 stars. Its just a bit too powerful to be a 4 star. I love the artwork btw. Anyways so yeah, for a 4 star, this thing can be a real hell-raiser. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Pain Posted October 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 I like it' date=' But I think it should be atleast 5 stars. Its just a bit too powerful to be a 4 star. I love the artwork btw. Anyways so yeah, for a 4 star, this thing can be a real hell-raiser. 8/10[/quote'] I'm thinking about ATK, DEF , LVL stuff now EDIT: What about now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jujitsubb777 Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 By the way, you put Cannjot instead of cannot. Just pointing out some OCG. -Instead of posting, ill just edit this... Nice improvement, the card is much more fair now. 9.3/10And like I said before, nice design. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Pain Posted October 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 By the way' date=' you put [i']Cannjot[/i] instead of cannot. Just pointing out some OCG. Lol, i hate it when i do stupid stuff like that XD EDIT AGAIN: done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xm0nkeyxbutt Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 very niice. i like the concept. it wold go well with other goblin cards. you should make a set. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 interesting add-on to the goblin play-style Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cgtrack2013 Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 good card 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Gravity Binder† Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 uHHHmmm.... Not bad.... but the pic could do some improvement.... anyway 8/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Pain Posted October 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 Thx guys for comments! I'm thinking about making a set soon :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chidori Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 Pretty good. Minor OCG errors. Other then that pretty good. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 summon should be capitalized. And it seems a bit overpowered but not bad 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 Add after card in the 2nd sentence: randomly from their hand. Good pic, change level to 6. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OnSlaUghT Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 it's not bad, very stink to your opponent. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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