Black Luster Magician!!! [First Fusion Card]*update:OCG errors fixed, pic fixed, holo

[Xm0nkeyxbutt]

here's my first fusion card. OCG errors fixed, pic credit given, pic fixed and holo'd. open to constructive criticism and suggestions.

 

[spoiler=Lore]"Black Luster Soldier" + "Dark Magician"

This monster can only be Special Summoned by Fusion Summon. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to activate 1 of the following effects:

-Remove 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field from play.

-Destroy 2 Spell or Trap Cards.

 

[Sparta™]

raise it one more star, and it's perfect. Right now, 9.9/10. Amazing job!!!!

[Xm0nkeyxbutt]

raise it one more star' date=' and it's perfect. Right now, 9.9/10. Amazing job!!!!

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thanks computerwhiz98. much appreciated.

[Chidori]

Wow pretty good for a newbie. OCG could use a little work though. Other then that its pretty good. 7/10

-Chidori

[Thomas Wolf]

Good job. Change it to read "Discard one card to activate one of the following effects" or something like that.

[Jovi Siagian]

Good job. Change it to read "Discard one card to activate one of the following effects" or something like that.

 

Agree with him. Overall' date=' [b']9.99/10[/b].

[cgtrack2013]

rly nice card 10/10

[~The Red Crusader~]

here's my first fusion card. pic credit to deviant art. open to constructive criticism and suggestions.

 

"Black Luster Soldier" + "Dark Magician"

This monster can only be Special Summoned by Fusion Summon. You can activate 1 of the following effects:

-Discard 1 card from your hand to remove 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field from play.

-Discard 1 card from your hand to destroy 2 Spell or Trap Cards.

 

Add what I put in bold. And the rating:

 

OCG: 10/10

Effect: 7/10

Pic: 10/10

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Overall: 9/10

[Code Y.C.M]

Good job. Change it to read "Discard one card to activate one of the following effects" or something like that.

agree, or you can have "Pay 300 Life-Points to activate 1 of the following effects"

 

very very very good for a 1star

hi5

[Catman25]

Pretty nice, OK pic, good effect, couple ocg errors, not bad at all 7.9/10

[OnSlaUghT]

it's good for a newbie, 9/10

[Professor Cobra]

This card can only be Fusion Summoned, great pic, awesome effect. 9/10

[Xm0nkeyxbutt]

bump

[Pyrotechnet]

The card seems a tad over powered. Can the effects only be activated once, or can you do it as many times as you want.

 

Can you clear that up for me?

[OnSlaUghT]

actually i think it's balanced because a fusion of black luster soldier and dark magician is hard to pull off.

[Pyrotechnet]

couldnt you just use polymerization to fuse them from your hand?

[OnSlaUghT]

Holy crap! I forgot that, but still, who would use Black Luster Soldier and Dark Magician in a deck just use this, except for Yugi, who apparently can bring out Curse of Dragon and Gaia for a fusion.

[Pyrotechnet]

I ran them in a deck for a little while when i was young and naive. but, in all truth, i know a lot of duelists who run random cards if one of the fusions fits their deck.

 

When you look at it, this is on the verge of being op'd. It all depends on how many times you can use the effect. Cause if you can use it repeatedly, and you have a few cards in your hand, you just removed their field.

[OnSlaUghT]

maybe if it was once per turn....

[Pyrotechnet]

Hey, you'll have 400 posts in a moment!!!!!

 

on the topic at hand, even once per turn, it still seems borderline OP'd. idk, maybe its just me

[FindingTheEverlight]

Fantabulous for a n00b, it's fair, it has few OCG errors and overall lovely pic 9.2/10

[OnSlaUghT]

i finally got it! i've been posting 12 hours straight. i did 120 posts today on every operational topic in the realistic cards section and now i have it.

[Sugarick]

how the freak do you u make fusion cards!!!! awesome

[OnSlaUghT]

thank you ruining the moment, just go in card type and select fusion. that is all. geez i would've -neg repped you but i'm too happy that i reached 4 stars.

[Pyrotechnet]

Congrats!!!!!!!!!