Azmodius Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 This Is my new card. I hope you like it. image by ruretto on DA Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 Add a comma after field in the first sentence, good pic, 2 cards from the top of your opponent's Deck. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OnSlaUghT Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 grammar needs work, the effect is OK but it shifts to the overpowered side. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 A good card, I like the name, the picture, and the effect. The OCG/grammar is also good, I think you should mention when your opponent shows you his/her hand though (i.e. Standby Phase, Main Phase ect.) 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Pain Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 Meh, its okay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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