Revan Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 Image credit: Image was found on google, I intend to make no profit out of the use of this image. Rate if you want, just dont lurkwhy do i get the feeling peoplr are lurking bcuz i told them not to? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OnSlaUghT Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 hmm not bad, but it's 'lower' not 'under'. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Docomodake Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 The effect isn't that original, you need to capitalize Summon, etc.3/5. I guess it's alright. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 Could be better... The picture needs a background and the effect needs creativity. OCG/grammar is alright, but chnage the errors that have been mentioned. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revan Posted October 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 ill fixfixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OnSlaUghT Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 ahh now that's better! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revan Posted October 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 i thanks for your generous rating Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OnSlaUghT Posted October 25, 2008 Report Share Posted October 25, 2008 your welcome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted October 27, 2008 Report Share Posted October 27, 2008 needs a better pic, also needs a better effect, make it more original. Good starting place, but you need to expand on it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xemba Posted October 27, 2008 Report Share Posted October 27, 2008 A better Marauding for machines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted October 27, 2008 Report Share Posted October 27, 2008 OCG is good, although the pic needs a background and the effect is too simple and basic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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