Ocean Hydra

[Scibor]

I imagine that this card has been made several times in the past, but I decided to put up my own take on what it should be. As always, criticism is welcome, but try to keep it friendly.

 

 

When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, you can discard 2 cards from your hand in order to Special Summon this card from the Graveyard to your side of the field in face-up Attack Position during your next Standby Phase. If you activate this effect, the original ATK of this card is increased by 400.

 

 

 

I think I worded the first part of the effect wrong.

 

The next three or four cards of mine will be released as a combo set.

[OnSlaUghT]

very good, and weirdly there has been no another card themed like this that i saw already. 8/10

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

The pic has been overused though.

 

Capitalize: Graveyard, Attack Position

 

Base ATK = original ATK

 

two = 2

[Skarlet]

not bad, except for the errors demented found its prety swwt, but 1 more, the last sentence, you put of instead of if, still great work

 

8/10

[†Gravity Binder†]

This card's type should be Sea Serpent not reptile..... ~___~ anyway.... niCe pIc.... a bit OCG errors... still not a bad card.... 7/10

[Essa]

how do you change your username.

[Chinotornes]

That should be in help section, but to answer your question go to this URL

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-54313.html

 

about the card OCG errors stated above overall good 7.6/10

[JG.]

You sure you've not made yugioh cards before? That is great for a new member! I see great things in store for you with those card making skills.

[Spire]

OCG errors:

 

Attack Position

Graveyard

 

The pic is overused.

[∮.Ғσяgσттeи.SσℓÐιєя.∮]

Wow.your good for a 1-star.have u made cards before?Awesome card.Love it.For bieng new,i give it a 9.7/10.by the way,you only need 15 more posts for 2 stars!

[A●O●J]

Ocg improvements. Thats the only bad thing about this card. its an all around ok card. 7.5/10

[Professor Cobra]

Use 2, not two, If you use this effect, this card's original ATK is increased by 400, good pic, Attack Position. Change level to 6. 7/10

[Scibor]

Thanks for all the feedback guys! I've changed (or am changing) the mentioned OCG errors. Believe it or not, no, I haven't really made cards before but if you're interested, the Set ID is accurate, so MJS - 006 means this is my sixth card.

 

I figured the pic might be overused, I'm going to try to put some picture editing into the thing to make all those so often used pictures look a little different. No, I can't make my own, but I can to some pretty cool edits.

 

@Professor Cobra

Sorry I didn't change the level, at level 6 it seems a bit overpowered, but then it is subject to change. I don't have the time right now, but I'll bring into consideration possible strategies to be used with this card, and if there are few, I will make sure to change the level.