Dylacummus Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 [/img]mill mill mill mill... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 Your OCG is good, however it could be worded slightly better. You used: "This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle" However, it's an equip card, so do this: "The equipped monster cannot be destroyed as a result of battle" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dylacummus Posted October 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 Your OCG is good' date=' however it could be worded slightly better. You used: "This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle" However, it's an equip card, so do this: "The equipped monster cannot be destroyed as a result of battle"[/quote'] Hmmmm your right Sharp eye! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A●O●J Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 Interesting name. Original effect. cool pic. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 Pic is used for a card in Yugioh GX, used by Jim Crocodile, good pic and effect, grammar problem. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted October 26, 2008 Report Share Posted October 26, 2008 I don't think the word "increment" is used in the TCG. everything else seems alright. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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