My First Card (The Crow rip off)

[Gothmo87]

Hi there!

 

So this is my first card, please be gentle to it :D

 

 

I know it's german, but I will translate it for you ^^

 

Card name: Realm of the Crow

Card's effect: Any monster destroyed on your side of the field is removed from play instead of beeing sent to the Graveyard.

Special Summon 1 removed Monster with "Crow" or "Crow man" in it's name on your side of the field during your Standbyphase.

 

Thank you for the hint Egypt5000 ^^

I hope you can understand my english o.O

(I'm guessing it's not the best...)

 

And I Hope you will like that card, if you do, there will be more ^^

[Egypt5000]

it is being sent

[SwordrainDelta]

Well kinda good card. But My opinion is that you should at least pay some life points for your monsters. 1 star 100 Life points 2 stars 200 Life points and so on.

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(I'm guessing it's not the best...)

You should´ve written

I guess it´s not the best.

 

... that´s that.

[jayjack]

there's "crow" in "crow man" is it really necessary to mention crow man?

[Postman Pat]

please be gentle to it?

What the crap does that mean?

 

and why make it in german then translate?

why not make the card in english in the 1st place?

[ihop]

Ich mage die karte sehr gern, das bild is nicht schlecht und das effekt ist gut.

Lol I'm bilingual.

The card is good, the pic is OK and the effect is good.

7/10