Jake Felton Posted October 28, 2008 Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 what do you think of this beauty?will it work? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted October 28, 2008 Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 I know you are a new member, and apparently 9 years old, but you need to work on your OCG/grammar (read DJ Osiris' thread). This is how the card should be worded: Decrease the ATK and DEF of all face-up Beast-Warrior-Type Monsters by 5000. That will surely make the cards atk and def 0, maybe change it to 500. Try to come up with creative and original effects too. Good luck next time! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake Felton Posted October 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 Thanks for the info. will look into it and do better. Cheers mate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brittle Ice Posted October 28, 2008 Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 You ask us to go easy on you???Why would we???You are YCM member as much as any of us is and NOBODY is going easy on anyone,...Name is nice.Pic is not so great,but OK.But,the effect???Not only you have many OCG mistakes,but you also created completely wrong card.I know this is your first try and that you are 9,but that won't make card look any better,will it???I would suggest you go and see the threads about OCG and basic rules.A friendly advice!!!Hope you will get better.^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted October 28, 2008 Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 Pic is fine. Effect is fine. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted October 28, 2008 Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 Pic isn't very good, the effect is written poorley, sorry to say, but Bengal has helped you with that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted October 28, 2008 Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 5000!? Grammar problems, don't understand, okay pic. .0000000000001/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkArmedDragon118 Posted October 28, 2008 Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 This is not realistic, there aren't cards that reduce monsters atk power by a freaking 5000 points! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted October 28, 2008 Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 It would have been more beautiful if you had read the Rules >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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