Queen-Dragoon Posted October 28, 2008 Report Share Posted October 28, 2008 Card Text:This card raises all Dragon type monsters ATK and DEF Points by 200. During your turn you can activate any and/or all of the following effects.- Special Summon one Level four or below Dragon type Monster from your Deck to the Field once per turn.- Pay 500 Life Points, Special Summon one Dragon type Monster from your Graveyard to the Field.- Discard one card to negate the effect of a Trap Card that targets a Dragon type Monster and destroy it. Credit to http://www.ronfosterart.com/show-image/519145/Ron-Foster/Majestic-Cavern.jpg for the image. This is a card I'd like to build a Dragon deck around. I'd like opinions on whether this is a good idea or a bad idea, a good card to base it on or a bad one.As for the card itself, could you guys just check for the usual? OCG? Power etc? I'm a noob but feel free to be blunt and honest, I'm gonna spend a lot of time on this so all constructive criticism is welcome. EDIT: Added 1500 Life Point cost to activate and sorted the OCG.EDIT 2: Changed to 800 Life Points. Changed every turn to every three turns. Changed "raises" to "increases" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K.B. strategist Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 increase instead of raises (and take out the "This card")1 instead of one4 instead of fourlower instead of belowDragon-TypePretty good, but overpowered as it lets you Summon 2 extra monsters in 1 turn; easy Tribute fodder. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 Pic is nice. OCG is nice. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 As KB said, it's OP.Cool pic and name though... Dragons are so overdone... -________- missing art credit is missing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 Read the Rules. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen-Dragoon Posted October 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 Thanks for the help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A●O●J Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 Dragons are EXTREMLY overdone. The card is very overpowered. pic is nice and original. Your ocg is pretty decent, but could use a bit of work. 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 OCG errors: Dragon-Type Cool pic, and good OCG, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen-Dragoon Posted October 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 How could I make it less overpowered? I don't want to change the effects so what would be ideal penalties? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen-Dragoon Posted October 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Bump.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steven Cope Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 remove the once per turn from effect number 1 because being able to special summon every turn is to unfair. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Use increase instead of raises, good pic, Dragon-Type monsters, Once per turn, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Dragon-Type monster from your Deck. Don't capitalize field. Change 1500 to 800. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen-Dragoon Posted November 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 Bump... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen-Dragoon Posted November 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2008 I've moved the card to a different thread. Mods feel free to lock. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ygo gx/5ds fan12 Posted November 20, 2008 Report Share Posted November 20, 2008 It is good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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