Bull3tM0nk3y Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Well here it is. Pretty cool huh? (This is my edit: At first I thought:8)Later::)Then::(Now::?I picture credit goes to my dad, he found it but I have no idea where he found it.I used it for my desktop's background for a little while.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 No need for all the Spacing, no need for Parentheses "()", and it's "Every Dragon-Type Monster". summoned = Summoned, and it's Fusion Summon. You don't need to say which Monsters you need to use again. And Sacrifice = Tribute.No qoutes around types.But you will get better, and I'll be happily waiting and checking out your cards to help you out ^_^-Yoshi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bull3tM0nk3y Posted October 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 No need for all the Spacing' date=' no need for Parentheses "()", and it's "Every Dragon-Type Monster". summoned = Summoned, and it's Fusion Summon. You don't need to say which Monsters you need to use again. And Sacrifice = Tribute.No qoutes around types.But you will get better, and I'll be happily waiting and checking out your cards to help you out ^_^-Yoshi[/quote']So on 10 scale how is it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen-Dragoon Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 You need image credit. And it's Gaia not Giya. More than a few OCG errors. Pic doesn't really suit the strength of the monster. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 OCG errors: Dragon-Type Sorry, the spacing just ruins it, 5.6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkArmedDragon118 Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 There are OCG errors and I hate the spacing and The pic is not good and i hate the spacing... 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bull3tM0nk3y Posted October 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Okay I will fix it give me 2 days at least.Okay I fixed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 I really like the image ^_^ 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azure Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 The pic is from time bandits (I think). There are some card grammar mistakes but thats about it. My rating is 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 OCG fix: "Gaia the Fierce Knight" + 1 or more Dragon-Type monster(s) When this card is destroyed by battle, increase the ATK and DEF of all face-up Dragon-Type monsters you control by 500. Not too bad, but the OCG needs work and the effect need a bit more creativity. The picture isn't bad though. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bull3tM0nk3y Posted October 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 OCG fix: "Gaia the Fierce Knight" + 1 or more Dragon-Type monster(s) When this card is destroyed by battle' date=' increase the ATK and DEF of all face-up Dragon-Type monsters you control by 500. Not too bad, but the OCG needs work and the effect need a bit more creativity. The picture isn't bad though. 6/10[/quote']Thank You so... much! It's so much to me if you say that!:DAnything that will make it better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bull3tM0nk3y Posted October 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 I really like the image ^_^ 8/10Thank you tiger. At lest someone likes it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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