coinsu Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 ok, i'v been hard at work making this card so i just got done so i want to know how i did so tell me how i did and if i did any thing (worng) so here it is. the effect.this card can only be special summoned by tributing 2 dragon type monsters on your side of the field.This card's Level is treated as -8, as long as it is on the field. select 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field and equip it to this card (this effect can only be used once per turn and you can only equip 1 monster at a time on this card) this card's atk and def is 300 x the level of this card and 1 of the monsters you used to summon this card.when a card is equiped to this card it gets the folowing.monster card:this card is unaffected by effects (except this card's effect.)spell card: this card is unaffected by spell cards (except the equiped card.)trap card:this card is unaffected by trap cards (except the equiped card.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
«₣lџχ» Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Ehh, OCG errors and it doesnt make sense. Also the pic is overused and needs pic credit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coinsu Posted October 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 ok, well what are the ocg errors? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
«₣lџχ» Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Special Summoned not special summonedthis cards Level is treated as -8, as long as it is on the field = As long as this card is face-up on the field, the Level of this card is treated as -8. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xm0nkeyxbutt Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 There are a lot of things you need to capitalize like the first word of the effect, Trap Card, Spell Card, etc. Your wording is everywhere and hard to understand. I can see the concept though and it sounds pretty good. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bunter Dwayne Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Weird. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:|Fallen|:. Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 OCG errors: Special SummonSpell CardTrap CardATKDEFDragon-TypeSummonedMonster Card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 the concept is decent, but it needs some work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Many OCG errors, but I like the pic. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Not bad, The OCG/grammar erros have been mentioned, make sure you capatalize the the beggining of each sentence too though (English grammar). The picture is a bit overused, but it is decent. I like the effort on the effect though, with correct OCG, it would been good. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rich kiddo Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Correction this card can only be special summoned by tributing 2 dragon type monsters on your side of the field.This card's Level is treated as -8, as long as it is on the field. select 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field and equip it to this card (this effect can only be used once per turn and you can only equip 1 monster at a time on this card) this card's atk and def is 300 x the level of this card and 1 of the monsters you used to summon this card.when a card is equiped to this card it gets the folowing.monster card:this card is unaffected by effects (except this card's effect.)spell card: this card is unaffected by spell cards (except the equiped card.)trap card:this card is unaffected by trap cards (except the equiped card.) This card can only be special summoned by tributing 2 dragon type monsters on your side of the field.This card's Level is treated as -8, as long as it is on the field. Select 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field and equip it to this card (this effect can only be used once per turn and you can only equip 1 monster at a time on this card) this card's ATK and DEF is 300 x the level of this card and 1 of the monsters you used to summon this card.When a card is equipped to this card it gets the following.Monster card: This card is unaffected by effects (except this card's effect.)Spell card: This card is unaffected by spell cards (except the equipped card.)Trap card: This card is unaffected by trap cards (except the equipped card.)7/10Ocg errorsGood ideaEffect is a little misleading Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coinsu Posted October 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 thank you for that, i have edited the card and its good i think.the effect.This card can only be special summoned by tributing 2 dragon type monsters on your side of the field.This card's Level is treated as -8, as long as it is on the field. Select 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field and equip it to this card (this effect can only be used once per turn and you can only equip 1 monster at a time on this card) this card's ATK and DEF is 300 x the level of this card and 1 of the monsters you used to summon this card.When a card is equipped to this card it gets the following.Monster card: This card is unaffected by effects (except this card's effect.)Spell card: This card is unaffected by spell cards (except the equipped card.)Trap card: This card is unaffected by trap cards (except the equipped card.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Nice concept, just needs some retooling and work. I can see what you're trying to do, just make it better. Also, pic is overused. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Still some issues, but it's better. Pretty nice overall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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