Terrifying Demonic Person who Gonna Eat ya Yugimanz if ya Don't Post! =O

[Void Old]

This card is unaffected by card effects while it exists in your hand, Deck, or Graveyard. If this card is removed from play by the effect of "Macro Cosmos", you can place this card face-up on the top of your Extra Deck instead of removing it from play to select 1 "D.D." monster from your Deck and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. While this card exists face-up on top of your Extra Deck, each time a monster is sent to the Graveyard, you take 500 damage, and each time a monster your opponent controls is removed from play, inflict 750 damage to your opponent. Also, as long as this card remains face-up on the top of your Extra Deck, each player must pay half of their Life Points to Special Summon a monster from their Extra Deck.

 

Image Credit goes to Wolfberserker (week #3.)

 

I figured it would be fun to give Dimensional Decks a little bit of halp, and give 'em a little control. Rates/Comments/Fixes/DOOM! would be great! ^_^ Infact, if at least 1 of the four isn't given, I can't promise the safety of ya Yugimanz. :P

[Spire]

Mind posting the effect? I can't read it!

[Void Old]

Oh, whoops, felt like I was missing something, will do. =P

 

Edit: Effect is up! ^_^

[legendhiro]

pretty interesting, though it's effect does not seem to fit archfiends so far. 8/10.

 

good idea. do that, ant your rating would definitely rise.

[Parting Shot]

Well, it seems a little overpowered, because if it ends up face-up on your Extra Deck, Macro Cosmos has to be in play, which means that no cards go to the graveyard (so you don't lose LP) and all cards are removed form play (so your opponent does lose LP). Now, I know that doesn't mean MC will stay on the field, but it's likely it will be around for several turns at least. Other than that, though, it's a very nice card.

 

overall - 13.22/13.69

[Void Old]

Okay, it's been renamed, from Horror Rift Archfiend to Horror-Rift Malice, because hyphens and malices are fun and having to give your monster a relation to the Archfiend archetype isn't. =P

 

Darth Browarod : Yeah, that's true. =/ It was made so that if Macro was destroyed, you'd be extremely vulnerable, but if it didn't tie in with Macro, it'd be much harder to remove cards from play and you would just get constantly drained. I think it's ok for now since your opponent only takes damage for when their cards are destroyed, but I might nerf the ATK a bit, or boost the damage taken from monsters going to grave. =P

[legendhiro]

EXCELLENT. 10/10.

[The Dark Master]

My head hurts from thinking =S. Seems new and origonal. Like a great concept...9/10 =D. Twelth highest rating I've ever given.

[Void Old]

Thanks Master, I'll try to make it more balanced somehow.

[The Dark Master]

I'd suggest trying to make is more...transitional and clearer

[Void Old]

Okay, I'm removing the part about summoning a "D.D." monster, it unbalances it and isn't related to its other effects so it'll go. Thanks. =D

 

EDIT: Edited! XD