pooppoop1 Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 pic : http://www.abm-enterprises.net/fractal-art/demon-throne-wallpaper.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Void Old Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Not bad, but has a few problems. Here's a grammar suggestion: You can Tribute a DARK monster you control to gain Life Points equal to the ATK of the Tributed monster. Don't use circulation please, you need a gold sticker for circulation to be realistic. Make the set id 4 letters before dash and EN and 3 digits after the dash. Fix it up and it's perfect. =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 pretty nice, aside from the grammar questions already mentioned. very sweet for a new member card. 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 yes. perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pooppoop1 Posted October 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 sweet thx man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Void Old Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Almost perfect, just don't say 1st Edition because Konami makes it block capitals and because 1st editions have gold stickers and it's too much trouble to have to edit one o' those on. So if you leave circulation blank, and change "on your side of the field" to "you control", it's perfect. =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 void's right. remove the fists edition. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pooppoop1 Posted October 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 what's the difference between your side of the field or that you control ?? lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 just that "you control" is the correct grammar in the current game. it doesn't really mean anything different. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pooppoop1 Posted October 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 hmm ok i see i'll change it then :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 I can't see the card. It says it's been moved or deleted. Try posting it again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
martinwwe Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 THe way the pic. is it won't math the name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 THe way the pic. is it won't math the name. have you ever said anything nice about anyone? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pooppoop1 Posted October 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 sorry i was busing editing the pic with the card maker it should be back now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Void Old Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Ok, just use the Set ID you had before and leave circulation blank and it's perfect. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pooppoop1 Posted October 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 alright i think it's good now i hope that people like my card :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Void Old Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Perfect! =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 100% perfect. i even skimmed over the grammar thread to be sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pooppoop1 Posted October 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 thx for the help man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 anytime. if you ever need help, just pm me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pooppoop1 Posted October 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 bumpy bump bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 I can't see any OCG errors!Pic is alright.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Pic could definitely use work. Effect is good, if a bit on the simple side.8.8/10 Missing Art Credit is missing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pooppoop1 Posted October 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 oioi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Change a to 1, change to Normal Spell or take out the face-up part to add this instead:Once per turn. Good pic and effect. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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