Chaotix® Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Hi everyone. I will not make any changes to this card, as I will enter this in a contest shortly, and I do not wish to have an unfair advantage. So go ahead and post your fixes and whatever else you feel is necessary :) k. Leave a rate or a comment! This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by its own effect. You can Special Summon this card by paying 1000 Life Points, when a face-up "Mobius the Frost Monarch" you control is destroyed by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card. When this card is Special Summoned in this way, destroy all Spell and Trap Cards on the field, and remove all Spell and Trap Cards in both player's Graveyards from play. Increase the ATK of this card by 100 for each Spell or Trap Card removed from play. Once per turn, you can pay Life Points equal to half of the ATK of this card to negate the activation of a Spell or Trap Card, and destroy it. If this card is destroyed by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card, return 1 "Mobius the Frost Monarch" from your Graveyard to your hand. Pic: Crypt Lord on deviantartHolo: Me and the_bucket_90Parallel Holo: Me :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the bucket 90 Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 ...card by payng 1000..card by paying 1000 points.for each Spell and Trap card removed from play.What i most liked was the name, i loved itI liked the effect.I like the texture of the card.And yay with my tut you now do advance holoes yays!9/10 cuz of those 2 ocg errors.And oh noez you found my favorite artist >=^[Awesome card manStill did the fixes for the future :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brittle Ice Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 9/10But,since I can't suggest anything-SHHHH!!!^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corinthian Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Awesome pic, one of the best holos I've ever seen. 9.7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotix® Posted October 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Hi everyone. Please do not give fixes' date=' as I will enter this in a contest shortly, and I do not wish to have an unfair advantage. k. Leave a rate or a comment! [img']http://i445.photobucket.com/albums/qq179/Chaotix26/Cards/Output.png[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by its own effect. You can Special Summon this card by paying 1000 Life Points when a face-up "Mobius the Frost Monarch" you control is destroyed by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card. When this card is Special Summoned in this way, destroy all Spell and Trap Cards on the field, and remove all Spell and Trap Cards in both player's Graveyards from play. Increase the ATK of this card by 100 for each Spell or Trap Card removed from play. Once per turn, you can pay Life Points equal to half of the ATK of this card to negate the activation of a Spell or Trap Card, and destroy it. If this card is destroyed by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card, return 1 "Mobius the Frost Monarch" from your Graveyard to your hand. Pic: Crypt Lord on deviantartHolo: Me and the_bucket_90Parallel Holo: Me :) ...card by payng 1000..card by paying 1000 points.for each Spell and Trap card removed from play.What i most liked was the name' date=' i loved itI liked the effect.I like the texture of the card.And yay with my tut you now do advance holoes yays!9/10 cuz of those 2 ocg errors.And oh noez you found my favorite artist >=^[Awesome card manStill did the fixes for the future :)[/quote'] Thanks bucket. I knew I mis-worded that bit, so I changed it, but I didn't change the other one, because I don't want to cheat :) P.S You can make suggestions, just no OCG fixes :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the bucket 90 Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Ok sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 lol, a gradient card recolor?Interesting... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotix® Posted October 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Parralel holo OMGA, but yeah basically :) What do you say about the card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A●O●J Posted October 30, 2008 Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 Nice. its too bad there not as good as mine LOLOLOLOL!10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotix® Posted October 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2008 I beg to differ =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Void Old Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 It's really cool! I like the special effect you did on the full card (not the picture, the one on the orange border.) Well, I can't see any issues yet, but I might once I'm allowed to. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotix® Posted October 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Allowed to? xD Ok, tell you what, fixes and stuff are now allowed, but I will not make any changes :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Void Old Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Yay! =D This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by paying 1000 Life Points when a face-up "Mobius the Frost Monarch" you control is destroyed by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card. When this card is Special Summoned, destroy all Spell and Trap Cards on the field, and remove all Spell and Trap Cards in both player's Graveyards from play. This card gains 100 ATK for each of either player's removed from play Spell or Trap cards. Once per turn, you can pay Life Points equal to half of the ATK of this card to negate the activation of a Spell or Trap Card, and destroy it. If this card is destroyed by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card, return 1 "Mobius the Frost Monarch" from your Graveyard to your hand. Okie, just say "This card cannot be Special Summoned except by paying 1000 Life Points when a face-up "Mobius the Frost Monarch" you control is destroyed by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card", not "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by its own effect. You can Special Summon this card by paying 1000 Life Points, when a face-up "Mobius the Frost Monarch" you control is destroyed by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card." Oh, and increase isn't used now, so just had to reword that a bit, and that's it. ^_^ Also, all of the recent sets have 4 letter Set IDs, as proof of this, the Duelist paacks used to use 3 letter set ids (DP1 etc.) now they use 4 letters (DP07 etc.) and other stuff like that. And that's everything. =D PS: ZOMG HOW JOO GET SHINY BORDER-ISH THINGY!? XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A●O●J Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 I beg to differ =Pyou wanna take this outside,BOI!?!? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brawler_1337 Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 That's an awesome card. It seems a little OP'd, though. Having 2400 ATK to begin with is standard of Monarchs; however, by the time you would likely get a chance to Special Summon this baby, both players have used a lot of Spell and Trap Cards. Gaining 100 ATK for each could lead to pretty high numbers. It also allows the reuse of Mobius, which is a pretty strong card to boot. Balancing may be an issue, but the pic is sick! It's really fitting for the name (which s also awesome). I really like the holo job, too! There are OCG errors, yes, but they are quite minor. I'd give it a 9.5/10. I'd love to have a copy of this baby in a Deck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Wonderful holo and Art ^_^Excellent Effect. Original. Maybe a little Overpowered, but the Summon Situation evens it out :D9.5/10 ^_^-Yoshi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 I think you don't need half of attack score just to negate spell/trap...maybe just 1000 or so will do nicely Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotix® Posted October 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 I think you don't need half of attack score just to negate spell/trap...maybe just 1000 or so will do nicely It's already slightly op, and that will op it more. Thanks for the comments anyway guys :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 awesome card!!!! Great name!!! Great pic!!! I am in awe!!!! 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Ah...sorry, thought we weren't supposed to give suggestions and whatnot.I'll come back tomorrow and look at it, if that's alright. I just finished doing a full indepth review of ned's 35 card set and I'm kind of wiped on the review side of things... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 excellent. kinda like a /buster for mobius. 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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