«₣lџχ» Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 It sux :( I spliced venamoth, parasect and the tail of arbok.Here it is:Venom Pincer Dash: Dashes at opponent, snapping its venomous pincers to scare it away. If it does not retreat it will cause aginising pain to opponent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Wow! Not bad. I've seen a lot worse. Good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
«₣lџχ» Posted October 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Thanks :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:|Fallen|:. Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 i like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotix® Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 I don't like it too much... But I'm sure you'll get better! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
«₣lџχ» Posted October 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Haha, thnx, i knew it sukd, im happy someone actually told me so Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaca Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 It's not amazing but it's done well.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 I love it! Make more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YamiNoMarikuXChiine Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 that's weirdbut also Cute X3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Digital.Simplicity. Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 I lke t 8/10 why don't you try splicing a digimon and a pokemon together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexander² Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Good at first glance, but under....... Ok, first off, if you take a close look, under it's claw on the left side, the border was erased, and it was erased again, in between the body and the wing, on the left side, and Jappio needs to look it over, but I don't think the recoloring is right either.Good for your First: 7.85/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 A word of advice. If Jappio sees this, he's going to give you a lot of information on how to make your splice better. Don't get overwhelmed.(You know Jappio, right?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 The Arbok tail dosen't fit in and has not been re-coloured. There are some border issues concerning the wings, which are also not re-coloured. Well, the pokemon you used just don't seem to work well, in my opinion. For your first, it's pretty good I suppose, they just don't seem to work well. Keep trying, and you will be successful! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Not too bad ^_^The colors are excellent, and the parts seem rightly Placed.9.3/10 :)-Lazer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
«₣lџχ» Posted October 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Thnx but what im really after is Jappio's comment :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 Glad to hear my critiques are being appreciated and wanted. Well then I'll try to do my best to disappoint. First thing I noticed was the wings, they seems to be placed very oddly. With a body shape like that, they wouldn't be coming out on that type of angle. They wouldn't be upright vertically like that, but horizontal. I'm not sure if I'm explaining this right, but wings generally when spread, are not perpendicular with the spine/back, but parallel. The next issue is the tail. It is a different color and texture than the rest of the splice. It's position also seems a little odd. The same could be said of the wings, their color doesn't look to match this sprite at all. The left claw (our left) has that white spot there, it shouldn't be white though, but that pink like color. The way you have it, the wing should be visible through that hole. Lastly I find there is too little venomoth and Arbok. It feels more like Parasect + some extra junk, then an actual splice. Work on your recoloring and blending some more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
«₣lџχ» Posted November 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 Thnx Jappio, exactly what i was looking for, good advice :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon_22 Posted March 3, 2009 Report Share Posted March 3, 2009 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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