Zombi Masuta Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 [align=center]Zombie Plague Picture Credit: http://www.aneyeoni.com/ART/Illustrations/Aleksi_Zombies_boxcover.600_600.jpg by AneyeoniFixed: OCG Errors I see this card as rather Odd Card for any deck. For a Zombie Decks it allows every day Warrior Cards to gain the potential power boost that Zombie have to offer, tho running Warrior removes from the Zombies theme. For Warrior Decks it allows for you to get a monster back, but at the cost of losing their humanity. ;) I'm thinking about adding more cards that deal with Warriors turning into Zombies. I just think the idea is rather unique, plus Warrior have always been rather popular in Yu-gi-oh!. I'm a little passive about this card, it lacks something, but we'll see.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Pretty good Zombie support. OCG errors: summon = Summoned Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Void Old Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 level = Level Warrior-Type Monster = Warrior-Type monster summon = Summoned summon = Summoned (again!) Zombie-Type Monsters = Zombie-Type monsters Fix those, take out circulation, and it's great! =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zombi Masuta Posted October 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Thanks guys for pointing out my mistakes. I'm still new to where capital letters need to be used still, I try to use cards as ref# but as you can see they aren't too reliable. Also thanks Void, I removed the circulation part and its looks generally tidy on the card. Edit: Card here removed, due to errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Now that's a rather unique effect there...it can make up part of some zombie-warrior deck here I expect good work from you in the future...7.53/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rodri666 Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Good job, make more cards of zombies!! 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brittle Ice Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Unique effect,...Hmm,great!!!^_^9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Add a comma after turn, I don't like the holo effect, change the comma after Graveyar to a period. Then, capitalize Monsters. Seems good. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 excellent effect. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zombi Masuta Posted October 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Add a comma after turn' date=' I don't like the holo effect, change the comma after Graveyar to a period. Then, capitalize Monsters. Seems good. 7/10[/quote'] Thanks for the fixes. New Fixes added here and in first post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oO C H A O S Oo Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 OCG is ok.Pic is good but it has a horrid holo.Nice attempt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zombi Masuta Posted October 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Going to edit the holo, I will keep the holosheet but will remove the emboss layer effects on the zombie. Unfortunely will need to wait till I've got my .PSD files from my main computer. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesus Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Picture Credit is where? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zombi Masuta Posted October 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Picture Credit now added, no picture credit was there at first because I got it from a site that just had a pack of Zombie pictures. Researched (googled 'Zombie' and the image came up on the first page) where the picture came from, credit is now listed in the first post. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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