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I just came up with an idea and made this card in 5 minutes. It was just an idea that I thought would be interesting for you veiwers to see.

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Effect:

This card cannot be Summoned except by Tribute Summon. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand and draw 1 card to activate this cards effect. Select 1 card on the field and you may select 1 sentence on that card. That sentence is treated as if it were not there. If the target is destroyed before you can apply the effect, you may choose a different target.

 

Now I wonder what this card can do?

RATE please. its by "Rei Magnus".

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Signature in top right corner of pic needs cropping. Name is kinda odd...Wisdom of Knowledge? They're synonyms, that's like wisdom of wisdom, kinda strange. Boundry=Boundary, and I think "the beyond boundary should be the limitless or something, it's a little vague.

Art credit should be in post, not circulation, not good for realism in circulation. Set ID needs to have 4 letters before dash, and EN is missing from post-dash. 000 is exclusively for secrets, not ultras. Done nitpicking, on to the important stuff...

 

First Sentence should just be "This card cannot be Special Summoned".

 

The cost is really pointless, so you can just skip it.

 

The last part should be "Once per turn, you can select 1 card on the field. Select 1 sentence from the effect of the selected card and negate it. If the selected card is destroyed before this effect can be applied, you can select a different card instead."

 

Remember, may=can.

 

It's a cool idea, fix it up and it's a great card. ;)

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Signature in top right corner of pic needs cropping. Name is kinda odd...Wisdom of Knowledge? They're synonyms' date=' that's like wisdom of wisdom, kinda strange. Boundry=Boundary, and I think "the beyond boundary should be the limitless or something, it's a little vague.

Art credit should be in post, not circulation, not good for realism in circulation. Set ID needs to have 4 letters before dash, and EN is missing from post-dash. 000 is exclusively for secrets, not ultras. Done nitpicking, on to the important stuff...

 

First Sentence should just be "This card cannot be Special Summoned".

 

The cost is really pointless, so you can just skip it.

 

The last part should be "Once per turn, you can select 1 card on the field. Select 1 sentence from the effect of the selected card and negate it. If the selected card is destroyed before this effect can be applied, you can select a different card instead."

 

Remember, may=can.

 

It's a cool idea, fix it up and it's a great card. ;)

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I have edit most of it. and I only made it in 5 minutes, so I already knew that is had grammar issues. Ill take some of your advice, but the name is right, part of it. He's suppose to be wisdom of wisdom or knowledge of knowledge. Thanks for that help :)

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