pooppoop1 Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Void Old Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Your card grammar is a little off, change it to "This card can only be equipped to a FIRE monster. The equipped monster gains 1000 ATK. When the equipped monster destroys a monster by battle, inflict 500 damage to your opponent." Fix that and it's great. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 FIRE every = each The equipped monster gains 500 ATK and DEF._________________________________________________ The pic could probably use a better background. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 OCG errors: FIRE Monster / FIRE Attribute Pic could be better, 7.3/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted November 1, 2008 Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 Good idea, a bit overpowered. maybe cgange the attack boost to something smaller, or make it so that it can only be equipped to monsters with 1900 ATK or less. Good start though!! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazza 101 Posted November 1, 2008 Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 Make it an equip card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OnSlaUghT Posted November 1, 2008 Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 i think the card should be a equip instead of a continuous Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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