These are awesome

[Kumkdar]

Please rate and correct any OCG. Thank you

 

[Steven Cope]

card 1: Wow man no need to write a whole book

card 2: at the end of your turn

 

pics r good though really good.

[legendhiro]

simple, but effective! 9/10.

[OMGAKITTY]

one = 1

Cards = cards

 

end of your turn = End Phase

 

End of the Line is too simplistic for me. :/

[NineteenHundred]

Card #1:

"When your opponent declares an attack, you can destroy 1 monster on the field."

 

Card #2:

Needs to be an Equip Spell, with the following grammar:

"The original ATK of the equipped monster is doubled. During the End Phase, destroy the equipped monster."

 

Other than the OCG Errors, they`re pretty good. 7/10.

[Kumkdar]

Card #1:

"When your opponent declares an attack' date=' you can destroy 1 monster on the field."

 

Card #2:

Needs to be an Equip Spell, with the following grammar:

"The original ATK of the equipped monster is doubled. During the End Phase, destroy the equipped monster."

 

Other than the OCG Errors, they`re pretty good. 7/10.

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Ah? No because, I don't want it to destroy only a monster and as for the second card I don't want to make it a equip spell because the card only lasts one turn, so no need to make it equip. Thanks for suggesting though.

[Yankee]

The title lied to me...

These cards need work. I want to see more originality from you next time.

[Kumkdar]

The title lied to me...

These cards need work. I want to see more originality from you next time.

 

Thanks???