cj_a Posted November 1, 2008 Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 Plz comment it and rate it. tell me if am getting better at this or not. Also tell me if the grammars correct Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted November 1, 2008 Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 Yes, your slowly getting better from what i've seen. However still errors: " This card cannot be selected as a target by a LIGHT, DARK, EARTH or WATER Attribute monster. " In my opinion, it's overpowered. The only other attributes left are fire and wind. I say you should just make it light and dark, or maybe just one. The effect is pretty simple. Go futher, add more, show originality. 7.1/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♫Griffinsusername♫ Posted November 1, 2008 Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 Yes' date=' your slowly getting better from what i've seen. However still errors: " This card cannot be selected as a target by a LIGHT, DARK, EARTH or WATER Attribute monster. " In my opinion, it's overpowered. The only other attributes left are fire and wind. I say you should just make it light and dark, or maybe just one. The effect is pretty simple. Go futher, add more, show originality. 7.1/10.[/quote']Exactly and make it can only be summoned by tributing 3 monsters and slightly lower its ATK. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted November 1, 2008 Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 yeh i agree, its ATK is way too high, espicially if u have a light deck or something, 3 tributes lower atk FIX ocg ANG YOU GOT YOURSELF A CARD ! 7.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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