Zombi Masuta Posted November 1, 2008 Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 [align=center]Plague Spreader Fixed: "Whilst" to "While this". "if" to "of"[spoiler=[b]Effect[/b]]You take no Battle Damage from battles involving this card. Whilst this card is in the Graveyard, you take 500 points of damage during each of your Standby Phases, also all monsters in both player's Graveyard are treated as Zombie-Type. By removing from play this card while it's in your Graveyard, all face-up monsters on the field become Zombie-Type while on the Field. Picture Credit: http://restmlin.deviantart.com/art/Zombie-68162639 by *restmlin [spoiler=[b]Personal C & C[/b]]Not much to say about this card. May be overpowered making all Monsters in the graveyard Zombie-Types, hoping the 500 LP dmg will balance this problem out. This card is to be used in conjunction with Zombie-Hybrid monsters.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted November 1, 2008 Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 ok i started to read it and got to Whilst?wtf is Whilst.Don't ya mean While this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Youko-San Posted November 1, 2008 Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 Nice Card, Lol I said the exact same thing 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azmodius Posted November 1, 2008 Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 Coolio!! nice card 8/10 :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zombi Masuta Posted November 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 Sorry I was meant to use "While this". Also "Whilst" is conjunction version of while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sammidysam Posted November 1, 2008 Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 I agree with you Zombi, I think I knew that also. Maybe it is like Olde English...(Old was spelled in old english) So nice card, sorry about joking around, and I would say it is a perfect 10/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrometheusMFD Posted November 1, 2008 Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 The card is good. I didn't find anything I could complaine about. Also-Whilst isn't Olde English per se, it is merely used in a similar context as whom (that context eludes me at the moment, but I will edit this later if I can remember it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zombi Masuta Posted November 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 Thank you for the comments so far on the card. Glad I got this card really balanced. :) [spoiler=Explaining "Whilst"]"Whilst" is a conjunctive word used to join two sentence. Used normally to compare one sentence to a different sentence.So example:"John looked around the castle. The others stayed outside""John looked around the castle whilst the others stayed outside. How I was using it for my card was wrong. I had it at the start of the sentence, lol. Anyways I've changed that to while now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted November 1, 2008 Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 Should be: while face-up, good pic and effect. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zombi Masuta Posted November 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 Could you point out what part needs to be changed please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted November 1, 2008 Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 Pretty good, solid OCG, 8.3/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ohgodwhy! Posted November 1, 2008 Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 The card says "during each IF your standby phases" which is wrong. Also there are errors with the ocg, just go reference some cards with similar effects on yugioh wikia to find out what kinds. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zombi Masuta Posted November 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 Changed "if" to "of" now, thanks for noticing that. I thought OCG was fine, everyone else seems happy with it, also I did exactly what you said when I first made this card. :) Also sometimes there no card with a simliar effect to the effect I'm trying to achieve. :) ("You take no damage..." from Spell Striker, "By removing this card..." D-Hero Mal) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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