Luna Lovegood Posted November 1, 2008 Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 Angel Of Naturalism And Nudity[align=center] This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. This card can only be Normal Summoned by Tributing 3 Fairy-Type monsters. If this card is the only card you control, this card's original ATK becomes 4000. This card's ATK cannot rise above 4500. While this card is face-up on the field, your opponent cannot control more cards than you. If your opponent has more cards on his side of the field than you when this card is Summoned, he cannot play any additional cards. If your opponent destroys this card while they control less then half the number of cards you control, you gain 750 Life Points. This card cannot attack if your opponent controls no cards..[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrueMallowman Posted November 1, 2008 Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 It's a touch...needlessly complicated, wouldn't you say? o_O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted November 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 Itt's a touch "Not" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrueMallowman Posted November 1, 2008 Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 The effects seem a touch thrown together (especially the LP gain), and there's various grammatical errors throughout the text. Compare: This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. This card can only be Normal Summoned by Tributing 3 Fairy-Type monsters. If this card is the only card you control, this card's original ATK becomes 4500. This card's ATK cannot rise above 4500. While this card is face-up on the field, your opponent cannot control more cards than you. If your opponent has more cards on his side of the field than you when this card is Summoned, he cannot play any additional cards. If your opponent destroys this card while they control less then half the number of cards you control, you gain 750 Life Points. This card cannot attack if your opponent controls no cards. But this is absurdly complex - it's a lot of effects to pack into a single monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Welche Posted November 1, 2008 Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 The effects seem a touch thrown together (especially the LP gain)' date=' and there's various grammatical errors throughout the text. Compare: [b'][/i]This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. This card can only be Normal Summoned by Tributing 3 Fairy-Type monsters. If this card is the only card you control, this card's original ATK becomes 4500. This card's ATK cannot rise above 4500. While this card is face-up on the field, your opponent cannot control more cards than you. If your opponent has more cards on his side of the field than you when this card is Summoned, he cannot play any additional cards. If your opponent destroys this card while they control less then half the number of cards you control, you gain 750 Life Points. This card cannot attack if your opponent controls no cards.[/i][/b] But this is absurdly complex - it's a lot of effects to pack into a single monster. Really, I think that it is all centered around number of cards on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted November 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 The effects seem a touch thrown together (especially the LP gain)' date=' and there's various grammatical errors throughout the text. Compare: [b'][/i]This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. This card can only be Normal Summoned by Tributing 3 Fairy-Type monsters. If this card is the only card you control, this card's original ATK becomes 4500. This card's ATK cannot rise above 4500. While this card is face-up on the field, your opponent cannot control more cards than you. If your opponent has more cards on his side of the field than you when this card is Summoned, he cannot play any additional cards. If your opponent destroys this card while they control less then half the number of cards you control, you gain 750 Life Points. This card cannot attack if your opponent controls no cards.[/i][/b] But this is absurdly complex - it's a lot of effects to pack into a single monster.What ever you say Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted November 1, 2008 Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 Change 4500 to 4000, change level to 8, ATK to 3000. Good pic, grammar problems. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted November 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 Done Prof Cobra Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted November 1, 2008 Report Share Posted November 1, 2008 I think it's increase to 4000 ATK is too powerful and should be lowered. Also From the effect: "he cannot play any additional cards" Should be "your opponent" instead of he. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 I'm not sure if the effect is worded properly. (I don't think I even know how to reword that) Nevertheless, not a bad idea. I lol'd at the name of the card. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted November 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 Aw, thanks DeMeNTeD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DesCrow Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 "If your opponent destroys this card while they control less then half the number of cards you control, you gain 750 Life Points."This part is useless fluff IMO. Other than that, the rest of the card is really great, good job man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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