celtic-guardian22 Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 i tried to improve the card with your suggestions i did not create this image this is the link to it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaeyuuji Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 OCG Errors: can not -> cannot Rating: 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 attack position = Attack Position Effect is rather simple and unoriginal.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 I revised your effect : As long as this card is in face-up Attack Position, this card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. Otherwise, good job. I'm glad to see that this card has a good quality picture, and has a balanced ATK and DEF. Keep up the good work. :) -Glasstin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Father Wolf Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 such a good pic deserves a better effect than this <.<5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 Capitalize the name: Vampire Knight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 OCG errors: Attack Position Overpowered, simple effect, 5.8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spirit knight Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 nice pic, for that 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 Good idea, simple, but effective. Can aid in getting out your big guns. I like it! Nice Job!!! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zombi Masuta Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 Doesn't suit the name Vampire. Vampire cards are known more for their reborn effects, or discard from Deck effect. With Zombies I normally say give them 0 DEF, just to stick with the trend. I like the search effect but I would prefer it a spell card and also Zombie normally like being sent to the graveyard. ;) I still think this is a good card, it's a zombie so it already looks good to start with. ;)6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 Add a comma after Graveyard, Graveyard, Deck, good pic, change ATK to 1500. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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