Lemniscate Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 Here is a card I made, I need help with the OCG!!!!I can't remember where I got the pic, but it is not mine. Content Removed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 I don't think hand needs to be capitalized, and after the word "turn" in the first sentence, I would place a semi-colon instead of a comma. The picture needs a better quality, and looks a little bit stretched. Otherwise, your effect is well-though out, and your entire card is balanced. Keep up the good work. :) -Glasstin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted November 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 here, is this better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 Use 1 instead of one, don't capitalize hand, okay pic, good effect. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 Pic could be zoomed in a little, but not too bad. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 OCG is pretty good. The pic is fine, 8.2/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 Read the Rules. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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