Tefached Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 [align=center]Well, after a month or so gone, I've come back with an atleast 4 card set that i plan to keep working on for the time being. I have 3 of them done so far. My card making skills are a little rusty. [spoiler=Suggestions]Second Card: Remove rest of first sentence after Trap Card Credit for all of my pics i use: Wolfbeserker. Just noticed Soldiernot Solideri'll fix [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesus Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 Graveyard, not graveyard. Always capatalize Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A●O●J Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 Ocg is pretty good. The pics are great, but ive already seen those wolfberserker's pics before.The names and effects are original and interesting,but i suggest you post the effects so its easier to read. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted November 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 In the spell card.....just noticed that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ohgodwhy! Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 Some ocg fixes:1st card: This card cannot be Special Summoned except by............2nd card: You can get rid of the rest of the first sentence after Trap Card, it's not needed. Overall not a bad start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted November 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 Some ocg fixes:2nd card: You can get rid of the rest of the first sentence after Trap Card' date=' it's not needed. Overall not a bad start.[/quote']I don't see how its not neededthe whole from your hand or deck that's needed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ohgodwhy! Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 Usually if you discard something, it means sending something from your hand to the Graveyard. So if you leave that sentence in it means you're repeating yourself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted November 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 good point...ill put it up for suggestions of other membersmore than 3 people ill change it[or a member that i know has great ocg.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted November 2, 2008 Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 (not optional) = (this is not optional) <-- I think Other than that, good work. 8) 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted November 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2008 (not optional) = (this is not optional) <-- I think Other than that' date=' good work. 8) 8.5/10[/quote'] i wasn't sure on that either...i've seen many cards with (not optional) but they were older ocg cards...not real sure thank you though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted November 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2008 updated4th card up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
naruto pie Posted November 4, 2008 Report Share Posted November 4, 2008 i like it. not Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted November 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2008 ..pleasewhen ratingactually rate...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monkybaby005 Posted November 5, 2008 Report Share Posted November 5, 2008 Great cards 8/10. they have really good picture and good effect i really like it, but no one is perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted November 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Bengal Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 Additional OCG errors: Spell / Trap / Monster card = Spell / Trap / Monster Card no need to say "points" after "500" in the spell card Sacrificing = Tributing life points = Life Points ^I know your OCG/grammar might be rusty, just thought I would point them out^ These are good cards Diety, I like the pictures, the OCG/grammar isn't too bad, and the effects are pretty good. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted November 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 thank you working on card 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Cowboy Dan Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 Pretty Good. Like the pics. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted November 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2008 thank youbut the pictures are not mine, thank wolfy for those Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Catman25 Posted December 5, 2008 Report Share Posted December 5, 2008 Nice, they correspond with each other. Like the Trap Card. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted December 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2008 thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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