A●O●J Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 [spoiler=[color=#32CD32]Effect[/color]]When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, flip all monsters on your opponent's side of the field to face-down Defense Position. Your opponent cannot change the Battle Position of the selected monsters. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, this card is returned to your Deck. The Deck is then Shuffled.[spoiler=[color=#32CD32]Effect[/color]] Thats not a real japenese word. I just made it up cause i wanted to. I had trouble wording the effect, so theres definetly some ocg errors.Picture Credit: Wolfberserker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 Hmm.... That is tricky. I don't know how to word it either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 "When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, except as a result of battle"Pic could be better,8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A●O●J Posted November 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 Hmm.... That is tricky. I don't know how to word it either.Holy crape! Kitty doesn't know how to word it either.WERE ALL GOING TO DIE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sucka369 Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 .... umm ..... eghhhh ...... LMAO that's hilarious!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Infernalhero Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 I like it.That really is hard to word -_-?8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K.B. strategist Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 "Your opponent controls" instead of "on your opponent's side of the field""by battle" instead of "as a result of battle"if instead of when for the destroyed by battle part and then change the is to wasAs for the wording of the effects... ... Seems okay as is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 Here you go ^_^ [spoiler=Fixed Effect]When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, change all monsters your opponent controls to face-down Defence Position. This position cannot be changed by your opponent. During an End Phase of a turn that this card was destroyed by battle, shuffle it into your Deck.[spoiler=Fixed Effect]When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, change all monsters your opponent controls to face-down Defence Position. This position cannot be changed by your opponent. During an End Phase of a turn that this card was destroyed by battle, shuffle it into your Deck. It's also increadibly overpowered. I put the "During the End Phase" part to put a tiny bit of balance in it ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazza 101 Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DesCrow Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 My attempt to help/make name for myselfIf this card would be destroyed as a result of battle it is instead shuffled into your Deck. When this effect is activated all monsters on your opponents side of the field are flipped into face-down defense position, the position of the affected monsters cannot be changed except by a card effect. (for 3 turns?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Gravity Binder† Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 uuuhhhhh..... not bad... ^_^ 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 Pretty good, i've seen the pic a couple of times though, 8.1/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hioco Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 Lol at the name. A few OCG errors but nothing too bad... Very good ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 huh, it seems interesting. I think it needs a different pic though. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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