Alexander² Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 (EDITED VERSION) Effect: If a "Lightsworn" Monster you control is sent to the Graveyard as a Result of Battle, discard one card from your hand, your opponent loses 500 Life Points at the end of the Battle Phase. I'm sure it has suckish OCG, i haven't made a card in a while though, as it seems like. Credit goes to Wolfbeserker. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 one = 1Lifepoints = Life PointsResult of Battle = by battle Great pic. Think the combined ATK/DEF is a little high for a 4 star8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 "If a "Lightsworn" monster you control is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, discard 1 card from your hand,"Good effort, 8.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexander² Posted November 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 First Post Edited. OCG Corrected. Yay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 You could probably even raise the ATK to 1600 or 1700, if you wanted.8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sucka369 Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 ....? why do you have 2 nvm that still good 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Von Csent Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 Think the combined ATK/DEF is a little high for a 4 star Luster Dragon As for OCG: At the end of the Battle Phase that a "Lightsworn" Monster you control is sent to the Graveyard by battle, discard one card from your hand to inflict 500 damage your opponent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Gravity Binder† Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 Just Perfect..... 10/10 ^__^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 OCG errors: Life Points Pretty good, 8.2/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 pretty good, job. nice pic. i like it. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skarlet Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 Not bad, apart from OMGAKITTY's errors, i see none 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chinotornes Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 the errors were already stated 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DJ- Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 pic:10/10ocg:7/20effect:8/20overall:8.5/10 it was pretty good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Legend Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 not bad :) 8.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 Don't capitalize result or battle, use 1 instead of one, maker her ATK 1600. Great pic. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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