LiAM Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 [align=center]Heres the card: Effect:If this card attacks a DARK monster, increase its ATK by 500 points during damage calculation only. A monster that attacks this Defence Position monster is destroyed on the third Standby Phase after attacking . Picture credit: Rate it or hate hate it, just leave a comment; :P[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ohgodwhy! Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 FIXES:Get rid of the attribute it's not needed. Just DARK monster is correct. Defence Position. I don't think this card needs automatically in it. *Destroyed.Standby Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted November 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 kk i will change and re-editok its fixed now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ohgodwhy! Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 Capitilise Phase and Position as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted November 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 happy now, is it perfect? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ohgodwhy! Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 You sound like you're annoyed. Sorry for helping improve your card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 Nice card. Good OCG and nice pic. Your cards are getting better, 8.6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted November 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 no im not getting annoyed, its jsut when i had to capitialize stuff, i dont bother with OCG, if ppl can understand it, and it makes sense, then, im okay with it, i only want ratings on cards thanks for your comments :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pooppoop1 Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 i like this card tho i dont ptu such a strong monster in defends that fast :P 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 Use during the, good pic, good effect. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted November 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 thanks :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A●O●J Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 Overused picDecent OcgEffect is short,but somewhat originalCool Name, but perhaps revise it a little7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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