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A new Phantom Beast


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I must agree that a large drawback must be added. Here are a few recommendations:

 

-Need to discard cards from hand in order to declare an attack

-Cannot attack directly

*Need to pay life points to attack*

-Lower DEF then switch to Defense Position after attack

-Can't summon monsters while this card is face-up

-Can't activate Spell/Trap while this card is face-up

-Skip Draw Phase in turn after this card attacked

 

Take one or a few of these and add them on (note that none of these have correct OCG, the wording is up to you).

 

 

Overall though, really cool, 2500 ATK seems too high for some reason but 2400 seems just right. As everyone said, pic is a little weird.

 

6.6/10

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I don't think it's that OP'ed. I reccomend you increase it to Level 5 or 6 (probably 6 w/ an ATK that high) or a change to the Card Effect. Maybe something like this:

 

This monster can not attack unless your Life Points are lower than your opponent's. This monster can not attack your opponent's Life Points directly unless you remove 2 monsters in your Graveyard from play.

 

Just an idea! :)

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I have A Serious Thing With you I'm Very Sorry This Has Nothing to do With The Card Dendalus Don't take things to heart ok where here to help ad serve ot Forgive and Forget anyways Back to the card.

 

The Pic Is A bit ehish the Effect Is Ok but to simple And This is only the Drawback Maybe add a More Effective effect not just the drawback, but yeah maybe increasse Level To 6 or 7 hope this helps.

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This is my first Phantom Beast From my created Booster Phantom Chaos nd the Deck of my created Charcter well myself. enjoy it.This Card cannot be Normal Summon or Set. This card cannot be Special Summon except by tributing 5 "Phantom Beast" with Different names on the field. This card is unnafected by Spell,Traps, or Monster effect. This card gains 500 ATK points for every Phantom Beast, Chimera the Flying mythical Beast, and Gazele the King of mythical Beast on your graveyard. It can attack all monsters once per duel and once per turn durring the Battle Phase you can Remove one or more Phantom Beast, Gazelle the King of Mythical Beast and Chimera the Flying mythical beast from the graveyard to increase the ATK of this card by 1000 points.

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This Card cannot be Normal Summon or Set. This card cannot be Special Summon except by tributing 5 "Phantom Beast" with Different names on the field. This card is unnafected by Spell,Traps, or Monster effect. This card gains 500 ATK points for every Phantom Beast, Chimera the Flying mythical Beast, and Gazele the King of mythical Beast on your graveyard. It can attack all monsters once per duel and once per turn durring the Battle Phase you can Remove one or more Phantom Beast, Gazelle the King of Mythical Beast and Chimera the Flying mythical beast from the graveyard to increase the ATK of this card by 1000.

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