Any helpful comments are welcome

[Radiant F.U.R.Y.™]

These are a few monsters Ive made since i stumbled across this site last night.

 

If this face-down defense position card is destroyed, except as a result of battle, special summon this card to your side of the field in face-up defense position. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to the graveyard to destroy 1 spell or trap card on your opponent's side of the field. Your opponent can discard 1 card from his/her hand to negate this effect.

(spirit)

This card can not be special summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand at the end of the turn that it is normal summoned or flip summoned. When this card is normal summoned successfully, no spells or traps can be activated during the battle phase. When this card is sent from the field to the hand. special summon the monsters used to tribute summon this card from the graveyard to your side of the field in face-down defense position.

When this card destroys an opponent's monster as a result of battle, the damage is halved and you can destroy 1 other card on your opponent's side of the field. This card is not affected by spells, traps or effect monsters' effects that specifically target a monster(s) on your side of the field. When this card is removed from the field, you can special summon 1 Mystic Fighter - Tama to your side of the field in face-up defense position.

 

 

If you have any comments or suggestions, please share them with me.

[monkybaby005]

I can't see their effect very well so I can't say anything.but some of your pictures look squash hint the first and the second.

[tommers2008]

defence position/ Defence Position, spell trap cards/Spell Trap cards

battle phase/Battle Phase, graveyard/ Graveyard

special summoned/ Special Summoned the same with Normal,Flip and Set

 

so overall some of the ocg is off

good pics

try putting the effects below the cards they aren't the easiest to read 6/10

[Radiant F.U.R.Y.™]

Thanks! I added the effects for easier reading (included OCG errors for continuity. I will try to improve on future additions.