A●O●J Posted November 5, 2008 Report Share Posted November 5, 2008 The Black Entertainer - Otsego[align=center] [spoiler=[color=#32CD32]Effect[/color]]This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set if your opponent controls 2 or more monsters. If this card would be destroyed by your opponent's card effect, you can discard 1 Spell or Trap Card to negate the effect of the card and destroy it. You can skip your Battle Phase to activate 1 of the following effects.- Select 1 card in your opponent's hand. Remove from play the selected card. During the End Phase of your opponent's next turn, add the selected card to your hand.- Your opponent sends the top 4 cards on their Deck to the Graveyard. Your opponent can select 1 of the cards sent to the Graveyard by this effect and and add it to their hand. [/align] I didn't know how to place bullets so i improvised. Rate and tell me what you think. Picture Credit goes to Wolfberserker.I didn't know how to place bullets so i improvised. Rate and tell me what you think. Picture Credit goes to Wolfberserker. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted November 5, 2008 Report Share Posted November 5, 2008 Good card, the picture is nice, the effect is interesting, and the OCG/grammar isn't too bad. OCG errors: "If there is" = "When there are" Spell or Trap card = Spell or Trap Card 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A●O●J Posted November 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2008 *BUMP* cmon guys.lets post some comments! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NineteenHundred Posted November 5, 2008 Report Share Posted November 5, 2008 Cool card. Good effect(s). Nice pic. Fair OCG. I give it an 8/10. Good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ABC Gun Posted November 5, 2008 Report Share Posted November 5, 2008 Nice card, but I don't see the proof of permission from the artist Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A●O●J Posted November 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2008 Nice card' date=' but I don't see the proof of permission from the artist[/quote']The rule only concerns Deviant Art, and also everyone knows who wolfberserker is. He also stated in his thread that everyone can use his pics as long as they credit him. http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-18348.htmlFrankly, Im annoyed that you just did this because I believe you only did it because of how I commented about you needing proper proof in your thread from the artist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted November 5, 2008 Report Share Posted November 5, 2008 Here's a lil OCG fix for ya. This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set if your opponent controls 2 or more monsters. If this card would be destroyed by your opponent's card effect, you can discard 1 Spell or Trap Card to negate the effect of the card and destroy it. You can skip your Battle Phase to activate 1 of the following effects.-: Select 1 card in your opponent's hand. Remove from play the selected card. During the End Phase of your opponent's next turn, add the selected card to your hand.-: Your opponent sends the top 4 cards on their Deck to the Graveyard. Your opponent can select 1 of the cards sent to the Graveyard by this effect and and add it to their hand. Not bad, but the 2nd effect benefits your opponent too much to skip your battle phase for it. You might want to give it an ATK of atleast 2400 though to give it some higher survival chance considering the Summoning condition. Change set ID to BMS0-EN069, or something along those lines, because realistic set IDs each have _ _ _ _-EN### Other than that, it's cool. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A●O●J Posted November 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2008 Here's a lil OCG fix for ya. This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set if your opponent controls 2 or more monsters. If this card would be destroyed by your opponent's card effect' date=' you can discard 1 Spell or Trap Card to negate the effect of the card and destroy it. You can skip your Battle Phase to activate 1 of the following effects.-: Select 1 card in your opponent's hand. Remove from play the selected card. During the End Phase of your opponent's next turn, add the selected card to your hand.-: Your opponent sends the top 4 cards on their Deck to the Graveyard. Your opponent can select 1 of the cards sent to the Graveyard by this effect and and add it to their hand. Not bad, but the 2nd effect benefits your opponent too much to skip your battle phase for it. You might want to give it an ATK of atleast 2400 though to give it some higher survival chance considering the Summoning condition. Change set ID to BMS0-EN069, or something along those lines, because realistic set IDs each have _ _ _ _-EN### Other than that, it's cool. ^_^[/quote']Quite helpful. Thank you very much.*FIXED* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted November 5, 2008 Report Share Posted November 5, 2008 No problem, and thanks for updating your card. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 The title of this thread sounds racist 0_0 Anyway,The effect is kind of overpowered to me, and I'm not a fan of the pic. Though, it's not a bad card overall ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Gravity Binder† Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 Yep not a bad card at all.... ^_^ 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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