Rebral the Gun Slinger

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[Bengal]

Not bad, the picture is good, but doesn't really fit the Yu-Gi-Oh type of card images.

 

The OCG/grammar is decent (no need to say "points" after DEF), but put the two effects on different lines.

 

A little overpowered in my opinion, lower 800 to 400 or 500.

 

8/10

[Iatkos]

I also like it, but I find your effect to be a little hazy. You should probably rephrase it to better define the limitations of its effect, such as if it can only be activated during your turn. It is unwise to allow people to try and imply your intended effect, because they will often take advantage of your shortsightedness.

The effect may need to be rephrased to, "Once per turn if there is a warrior monster you control besides "Rebral the Gun Slinger" you can activate one of the following effects:..." or something closer to the way the TCG would phrase it.

 

I would also suggest compounding Gun Slinger, into Gunslinger, to form a more cohesive title.

 

7/10

[Spire]

I don't like the pic, but thats jus my opinion. The OCG is pretty good with a fine effect, 7.5/10.

[Professor Cobra]

Inflict 800 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points.

Start a new line for each choice. Good pic. 8/10

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

your side of the field = your field

 

take out "Direct"

 

7.5/10