Prada Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 Wow, long time since I last made a card. Give some advice, I'm going off memory here. I got the images from Google and Photobucket. CnC please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 Well, um, you have some OCG errors. Legacy of Darkness: When this card is activated, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower DARK monster from your hand. Then, remove this card from play. Dark Drone - Drako: Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can select 1 LIGHT monster on your opponent's side of the field. Decrease that monster's ATK and DEF by 500 points. If this card is destroyed by battle, remove the selected monster from play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iatkos Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 The ideas are nice, and they arent overpowered. Unfortunately, you have syntax errors. You should capitalize the entire attribute's words, and change Dark-Type to DARK. Additionally, your first card would have no real effect (Of course, I could be misreading it, its actual effect having the property of summoning an additional monster with the same name) being that if you already control the card, it is already on the field (I again could be misreading it, because that could be a valid effect, per se, if the monster where a Gemini monster, but even then the text is not clear enough). First Card 5/10 Second Card 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 ...Syntax errors...? That's an interesting way to put it... o_O... We call them OCG errors instead. Would help to NOT throw off some people. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord of Chaos Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 I haft to agree with Tetraslash but your right thay're not overpowered..... 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrueMallowman Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 Legacy of Darkness is pretty broken-seeming with the corrected text - for any Dark deck, it's a much more powerful Double Summon that you can use during your opponent's turn. Dark Drone is the opposite - it's pretty situational and pretty underpowered. Not a bad concept, but effects that require the opponent to have a certain element are usually not all that useful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kazuki01 Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 all have been said.... xD 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 OCG errors: SummonDark-Type = DARK Attribute (There is no Dark-Type!) Pretty good, though I think card one could use a better pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted November 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 Wow, better than I expected they would be. Thanks to all who commented! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 Simple, but somewhat effective. Maybe add a couple more effects to them. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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