Sigma Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 yes Gamekrazzy agreed to this,also,he agreed with this since I haven't really seen cards like these. Do Not Vote Till Game gets his card. Loser has to give winner 100 points,and 2 rep. XEVILCl0wnX's Card:IMG from Photobucket,looking up Dark Flame Gamekrazzy's Card: End Date: 11/18/08 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Prince Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 XEVILCl0wnX's all the way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 I vote xevilclownx. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sigma Posted November 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 Yes! 2-0! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gamekrazzy Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 No fair, my card's not bad. If it's effect is too long sorry. If you actually read it's effect, it's pretty balanced and very useful. NVM. But please vote fairly k. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sigma Posted November 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DesCrow Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 Honestly both of these cards are pretty bad.However I guess Evil's is better because it doesn't have 3 x10^34 effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 XEVILCl0wnX ≥ gamekrazzy Slightly less OCG errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Pikachu Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 They both have tons of OCG errors.... Evilclown: This card's type is also treated as a Spellcaster. This card cannot be destroyed by a LIGHT type monster. During your Draw Phrase, you may discard 2 cards from your Hand and draw 2 cards. If you discard this card from your Hand to your Graveyard, you may Special Summon this monster. Comments: The last effect is a bit overpowered, bit nice pic, and I rather it not to be Synchro. Gamekrazzy: FLIP: All 'Dark Flame' monsters on your side of the field increases their ATK by 500. Special Summon as many 'Dark Flame' monsters as you can. As long as this card is on the field, all card effects are negated. If there are no other monsters on the field except this card, destroy 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle, all monsters on the field are removed from play. Comments: Sentence structure and OCG is a bit off. nice pic and good effect concept, though the ATK could be a bit higher. Overall: Gamekrazzy, just change the effect to this and you're on a winning streak! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 Both cards have OCG errors! >_< XEVILCl0wnX, because he has fewer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 I don't judge on the OCG.I judge on the flavor on the effect, because OCG can be easily fixed Evilclown's effect doesn't do much good, and it's kinda cheap when in your hand. Dark Flame Wolf is kinda like a multi defence system, gathering all the wolfs in defence mode and forming a wall your opponent can't break. If you removed the last effect, this card is perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gamekrazzy Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 I like what your saying dude. But basically what my last effect is saying is that when it is attacked and the effect is activated, to remove him from play. Or else he would be to powerful. But I do like what you are saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 The wolf has some serious OCG issues and its pic isn't really relevant to Dark Flames, so I'm going to vote Clown here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gamekrazzy Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 READ THE EFFECT MORE THOUROUGHLY. Please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DesCrow Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 The wolf has 5 seperate effects.It has a ton of effects. Here are the problems 1. The "FLIP" effect is useless because the gain is before alll the new monsters are summoned2. "Special Summon AS MANY darkflame monsters as you can." That is broken, and it also doesn't say where to summon them from.3. "All card effects are negated as long as a Dark Flame Wolf is on the field. "This is dumb, it negates ALL of its own effects4. "If there are no monsters on the field but this card, destroy an opponents monster" well there would be no monster to destroy so this is useless.5. "If this card is destroyed in battle remove all cards on the field from play" with nothing to protect this guy, and the fact that you just summoned a bunch of monsters, and the fact that this HIGHLY broken effect is negated anyways...nevermind >_> I won't even touch the OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gamekrazzy Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 DesCrow, SUMMON THE MONSTERS BEFORE FLIPPING. Why write extra when you expect the duelest to know. When I said "Special Summon as many "Dark Flame" monsters as possible. and don't include anything. It basically means from the obvious location, the hand...I kinda expect the person to know that the negate effect cannot negate it's own effect, because then it cannot negate any other card effects.(I guess I should reword that one though.) I ment in your opponents control. oops. I guess we all make mistakes. Last but not least the remove from play was to balance the card's effect.And if you go by OCG. Mine is New. As you might know new ocg is to where the effects are made shorter, by not being too descriptive. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 You can't just "expect the duelist to know" what you mean when you've left out major points. And new OCG still has to tell the duelist enough to understand the effect, it's just worded differently, like how "gain" is used instead of "increase" these days, which you did not use. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:|Fallen|:. Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 Gamekrazzy has a pic i never see but thar flame spellcaster i have seen loads of times so i vote Gamekrazzy sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gamekrazzy Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DesCrow Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 From a PMI understand. I guess you are... NVM' date=' Im not going to get myself into trouble here. I guess my OCG is just newer and better than all of yours. You are just not an experianced enough duelist to know what the common meaning of My OCG is. I have seen cards that do not explain where the cards are special summoned. If the duelist doesn't understand my effect, then the card is too advanced. Even XEVIL understands my effect. I don't care if I win. This is for fun, and I am more experianced than you. It may not look like it, But I joined the same time XEVIL did. I am just not as active.[/quote'] Don't talk to me about OCG as mine is perfect. Yours is... let's face it garbage. You can't even spell "experienced" it has an "E" not an "A"Molificent isn't a word, it's Maleficent. Also, never threaten users or pretend you are better than them, it's a quick and easy way to lose respect around here. The following are OCG errors in your Card flip: = FLIP: as many "Dark Flame" monsters as you can" = need to designate a place, as special summoning can mean from hand, deck, graveyard or removed from play. All cards effects are negate as long as a "Dark Flame Wolf" is on the field. = Does not specify which cards, leading the user to believe it means ALL including Dark Flame Wolf. Also, the "as long as a "Dark Flame Wolf" is on the field." is redundant, monsters must be on the field ANYWAYS for their effect to activate(unless otherwise stated) and say "this card" not the name of the card. If there are no monsters on the field(whole field, yours, or theirs NEEDS to be stated) besides this "Dark Flame Wolf"(Should say card)(should say If this is the only card on ( ) field) ,(no "," should be "you can")destroy 1 monster in your opponents control. (should be on your opponents side of the field.) Also, there is no limit on this, and if, as you say, it implies your field, then you can essentially just destroy EVERY monster they control with no cost. B_R_O_K_E_N. "If this monster is destroyed as a result of battle, ( NO commas) remove from play all monsters on the field". Aside from being UNGODLY broken it should read "all monster on the field are removed from play". And no, there are NO "TOO" advanced cards for players, show me ONE real one, in the mean time do not try to contact me via PM. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gamekrazzy Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 I'm just making a big fool out of myself. XEVIL, I believe I am going to lose. I just wish people would go by the value of the effect, and decipher it so they can understand. If you truly understand my card's effect, only then do you know the value. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DesCrow Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 FLIP: Special Summon any number of "Dark Flame" monsters from your hand. All "Dark Flame" monsters on the field gain 500 ATK as long as this card remains face-up on the field. Once per turn, if you control no other monsters you may destroy 1 opponents monster. Negate the effects of all other monsters on the field as long as this card remains on the field. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle all monsters on the field are removed from play. There, I fixed all your OCG (I probably missed a couple things, but corrected for the most part) and made your effects as specific as they were supposed to be. It is still broken, sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gamekrazzy Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 Thanks, now I know you do Understand what my effect was trying to say. IF I could fix it like you did, I might stand a chance in this contest, but IDK if XEVIL will let me. I know he has already won if my card isn't fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sigma Posted November 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 Go ahead and Fix it,IDC. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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