«₣lџχ» Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 Ok, this is my newest single with disgusting OCG :( Whoever can give me a proper fix gets a +rep :) [spoiler=[b]Card Lore[/b]]This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card canonly be Advance Summoned by Releasing 2 monsters and 1 Spell Card you control. This card's Attribute is also treated as WIND and EARTH. When this card is successfully Advance Summoned, you can destroy every card on the field. Once per turn, select 1 Type of monster. Increase the ATK of all monsters of the selected Type for each monster of the selected in both player's Graveyard x 150 on the field until the End Phase of the turn this effect was activated. With this card's effect you cannot select a Type of monster over 2 times. When a monster you control is designated as an attack target, you can Release 1 Beast, Beast-Warrior or Winged-Beast-Type monster you control to negate the attack and destroy the attacking monster. If this card is destroyed by battle, increase both player's Life Points by the number of monster Types selected by the effect of this card x 200. If this card is destroyed by the effect of a Spell, Trap or Monster Effect Card, decrease your both player's Life Points by the number of monster Types selected by the effect of this card x 200. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kazuki01 Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 WOAH THATS A LONG EFFECT!!!! anyway OCG is good and good pic... 8/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kirby Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 hmmmm nice card good pic a little bit over powed but not bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
«₣lџχ» Posted November 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 Ok i dumbed it down a little Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 Here's the correct OCG. This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Advance Summoned by Releasing 2 monsters and 1 Spell card you control. This card's attribute is also treated as WIND and EARTH. When this card is successfully Advance Summoned, destroy all cards on the field except "Necromantic Night Druid." Once per turn, you can select 1 type of monster. Increase the ATK of all monsters of that type by an amount equal to the number of monsters of that type in each player's Graveyard x 150 until the End Phase. You cannot select the same type of monster more than 2 times. When a monster you control is selected as an attack target, you can release 1 Beast, Beast-Warrior or Winged-Beast type monster you control to negate the attack and destroy the attacking monster. If this card is destroyed by battle, increase both player's Life Points by 200 for each type of monster selected for this card's effect. If this card is destroyed by a card effect, decrease both player's Life Points by 200 for each type of monster selected for this card's effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
«₣lџχ» Posted November 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 Ok i changed it a bit and not quite sure that 100% correct, sorry :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 So, do I get a +rep? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
«₣lџχ» Posted November 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 Maybe...?:? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kazuki01 Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 hahaha i think he's begging for repsxD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 OCG errors: attribute = Attribute Pretty good card overall, just that minor error, 8.7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
«₣lџχ» Posted November 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 Thnx :) Is it OP or UP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kazuki01 Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 change " you can destroy every card" to "you can destroy all cards". and no it's just balanced.... ^_^ for me i guess.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
«₣lџχ» Posted November 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 Thnx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 Change 150 to 200, good pic, nice creative effect. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 Fix: This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Advance Summoned by Releasing 2 monsters you control and by discarding 1 Spell Card from your hand. This card's Attribute is also treated as WIND and EARTH. When this card is Advance Summoned successfully, destroy all cards on the field (except this card). Once per turn, select 1 Type of monster. Increase the ATK of all monsters of the selected Type for each monster with the same Type in both player's Graveyard x150 until the End Phase of the turn this effect was activated. You cannot select the same Type more than once. When a monster you control is selected as an attack target, you can Release 1 Beast, Beast-Warrior or Winged-Beast-Type monster you control to negate the attack and destroy the attacking monster. If this card is destroyed by battle, increase both player's Life Points by the number of monster Types selected by the effect of this card x200. If this card is destroyed by the effect of a Spell, Trap or Monster Effect Card, decrease both player's Life Points by the number of monster Types selected by this card's effect x200.________________________________________________________ I changed it to discarding 1 Spell Card from your hand (beginning of effect) because you don't release Spell Cards. You send them to the graveyard. (Same thing, I know, but not proper OCG). Also i though it sounded better this way.________________________________________________________ Card overall isn't bad. It's actually somewhat unique. Pic is cool and fits the name well. ^_^ 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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