Venturer Elite Posted November 8, 2008 Report Share Posted November 8, 2008 Hey Guys, I am new to YCM, so I thought I would start off on the right foot. Here is my attempted contribution :lol: I hope you like it :). Please rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 No such thing as a quick play trap. Make it a counter trap. Destroy all "Cyber End Dragon" Monster Cards where?______________________________________________ Pic is alright.7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Venturer Elite Posted November 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 Thank you for your response.I will make those improvements :)I will be releasing more cards soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 Some OCG errors, and you need to either get a different pic or remoce the words in the current one. But nice job for a newbie. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Venturer Elite Posted November 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 I don't know how to change the card. I didn't save it :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 You'll have to remake the card. By the way, remember that you must credit the artist who made the picture you are using. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LightAndDarknessDragon Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 Good idea but Cyber End is dead. And this shouldn't be a Quick-Play OR a Counter Trap, but just a normal Trap. There's some OCG problems, like " 'Cyber End Dragon' Monster Cards" should be " 'Cyber End Dragon' monsters," and there is no "Direct Damage" anymore, just say "Inflict 300 damage to your opponent for each 'Cyber End Dragon' monster destroyed." I give this card 5/10 because it is too much like Gryphon Wing, which is absolutely terrible. P.S. Try not to leave the stock photo label on the picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Venturer Elite Posted November 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 I am remaking it soon :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted November 9, 2008 Report Share Posted November 9, 2008 Take out Monster Cards, on thier side of the field, okay pic, should be:This effect cannot be negated. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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